Need feedback on story:)

[Forever1201]

Feedback Group {OFFICIALLY OPEN}

WELCOME TO THE FEEDBACK GROUP!!! Here you come to get feedback on your story, there are three of us @Forever1201 @Danielle318 & @AMagic if you would like to join PM me. RULES You may not get upset over a truthful review. We can accept or deny your review. It will be denied if you don’t give us your Story Link, Title, & Cover, plus a description of your story. We are not robots, we have lives outside of the forums, so you must be patient. When you have gotten your feedback, make sure t…