Need feedback on this edit


#1

What do you think of this?:


#2

Love it she looks just like the girl from Harry Potter forget her name tho. If she had black hair she will of looked like ALEX from wizards of place lol


#3

Yeah, she was supposed to look like the girl from Harry Potter. Her name is Hermione by the way.


#5

It is a really nice try, although I think her face is a little too blurry…


#6

Don’t mind me, I just deleted a post because I’m blind af and I misunderstood.


#7

Well you did good if that pic is for a story I will love to read the story


#8

Thanks. I will try to improve.


#9

No, it’s not for a story. I was just practising.


#10

Or ok kool


#11

You kinda went a bit too dark on the contour so try lighten them up a little. Also don’t use white to highlight use a lighter colour of her skin tone.


#12

Hermione Granger! :open_mouth:


#13

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#14

Okay, thanks for the feedback!


#15

Moved to Art Resources since Share Feedback is for stories. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics. :wink:


#16

Wow amazing wanna join episode harmony


#17

Thank you but I think I still need to improve :slightly_smiling_face:
Thanks for the offer but I’m already a member of an art group.