Need help deciding what to remove from my story! (If I need to)

After seeing that I should shorten the chapter, could anyone read it and tell me what I could remove? Cause I really don’t know what to remove as I feel it’s necessary for the plot (no offense to anyone, love y’all :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:) but then I was thinking it could bc of the persons reading speed

I could try and give you an opinion!

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Instead of removing you could either merge it with the next chapter or move some scenes to the next one.
Otherwise think about this: If a scene doesn’t move the plot or character development forward, it’s unnecessary. :slight_smile:

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The only thing is I feel like it does so it’s necessary :weary:. Maybe when you review it you can lmk?

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Sure! :smiling_face:

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Thank you!

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