Put a pause so that readers have enough time to look at the outfit.
You’ll need a label for the readers to go back and forth before they decide on the outfit.
label choosing_outfit
NARRATOR
What do you want to wear?
choice (changing)
"Rock it in Camo"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes into Camo
@pause for a beat
FEMALEAVATAR (talk_excited_happy)
OMFG, I LOOK SO HOT! Better Hurry!
NARRATOR
Is this the right choice?
choice (camo_outfit)
< GEMS>“Yes!”{
}
"I want to look at others"{
goto choosing_outfit
}
}
"Show whos boss in this baddie style!"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes into Badgirl
@pause for a beat
FEMALEAVATAR (talk_excited_happy)
I look like the main bitch now! Better Hurry!
NARRATOR
Is this the right choice?
choice
"Yes!"{
}
"I want to look at others"{
goto choosing_outfit
}
}
"Show them how cute you can be"{
@FEMALEAVATAR changes into sway
@pause for a beat
FEMALEAVATAR (talk_excited_happy)
Omg! I look sooooo cute!! Better Hurry!
NARRATOR
Is this the right choice?
choice
"Yes!"{
}
"I want to look at others"{
goto choosing_outfit
}
}
@FEMALEAVATAR exits left
@transition fade in black