Need help on a story description is this good?

Having a learning disability is hard for Samantha Until she meets Nick her sunshine, Will Nick help her overcome her disability or be a disappointment to her?

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How about this?
Samantha a girl with a learning disability that makes life hard for her until Nick.Will hr help her over come her disability? Or will she just be Disappointed?

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that sounds good!
which one do you think sounds better?

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Honestly either one its your choice I just took your a worded differently

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Oh okay thanks :grinning:

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Samantha is a girl who has a learning disability, and her life is pretty hard. One day she meets Nick, her sunshine. Will Nick help her to overcome her disabibilty, or be a disappointment to her?

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