Need help. please help

Both outfits have two different pictures that match the outfit.

INT.SURPRISE and INT.SURPRISE2

But can’t figure out how to write it correctly, sorry suck at explaining

music off

@pause for a beat

INT.CONTINUED

music music_bummer

@pause for a beat

INT.CLOSET1

@cut to zone 2

@CECILIA3 spot 0.875 180 168

label choice_outfits1

    CECILIA3

(I need to choose something.)

...

choice
“I don’t care”{
@CECILIA3 is dustoff_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@CECILIA3 changes into idontcare
@CECILIA3 is idle

}
CECILIA3

(Wear this?)

choice
“Yes”{
CECILIA3

(Here I go.)

}
“No”{
goto choice_outfits1

}

@pause for a beat

    CECILIA3 (talk_neutral)

Door close.

INT.CLOSET2

@cut to zone 2

@CECILIA3 spot 0.875 180 168

@CECILIA3 exits left

INT.INNER CITYPHARMACYDAY

@CECILIA3 enters from right to screen right

    CECILIA3 (think_rubchin)

(Where is it?)

@CECILIA3 is rear

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 is idle AND CECILIA3 faces right

@cut to zone 3

@CECILIA3 enters from left to screen left

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.812 159 143

@CECILIA3 is rear

@CECILIA3 faces left

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 faces right

@pause for a beat

    CECILIA3

(Where is it?)

@CECILIA3 is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop_rear

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 faces right

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 faces left

@CECILIA3 is reach_kneel_neutral_rear

@CECILIA3 is idle AND CECILIA3 faces right

    CECILIA3

(Found it!)

    CECILIA3 (breathe_deep)

(This is happening.)

@CECILIA3 exits right

INT.BATHROOMDAY

@CECILIA3 enters from left to screen left

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 1.280 441 20

music off

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

sound toilet_flush

@pause for a beat

    CECILIA3

(Now, I wait.)

music music_stressbeat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

    CECILIA3

(Oh, the wait is | animation:flash, color:red |killing |reset| me.)

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 165 163

@CECILIA3 is deepbreath

INT.BATHROOMDAY with PREGTEST2 in zone 1 at layer 0

@CECILIA3 spot 0.929 165 163

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 277 168 AND overlay 6540809011986432_PREGTEST2 shifts to 94 239 in zone 1 AND overlay 6540809011986432_PREGTEST2 scales to 1.000 1.000 in zone 1

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 55 160

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 277 168

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 55 160

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 277 168

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 55 160

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 277 168

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 130 166

@CECILIA3 is breathe_deep

@CECILIA3 is rear

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 is idle

INT.BATHROOMDAY with PREGTEST2 in zone 1

@CECILIA3 spot 0.929 130 166 AND overlay 6540809011986432_PREGTEST2 shifts to 119 209 AND overlay 6540809011986432_PREGTEST2 scales to 1.000 1.000

@pause for a beat

CECILIA3

(Here we go.)

INT.SURPRISE

@pause for a beat

INT.PREGTEST

@zoom reset

@cut to zone 2

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR

I was surprised.

label choice_outfits2

    CECILIA3

(I need to choose something.)

...

choice
“I don’t care”{
@CECILIA3 is dustoff_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@CECILIA3 changes into idontcare
@CECILIA3 is idle

}
CECILIA3

(Wear this?)

}
“Just be sexy”{
@CECILIA3 is dustoff_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@CECILIA3 changes into canstillbesexy
@CECILIA3 is idle

}
CECILIA3

(Wear this?)

choice
“Yes”{
CECILIA3

(Here I go.)

}
“No”{
goto choice_outfits2

}

@pause for a beat

    CECILIA3 (talk_neutral)

Door close.

INT.CLOSET2

@cut to zone 2

@CECILIA3 spot 0.875 180 168

@CECILIA3 exits left

INT.INNER CITYPHARMACYDAY

@CECILIA3 enters from right to screen right

    CECILIA3 (think_rubchin)

(Where is it?)

@CECILIA3 is rear

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 is idle AND CECILIA3 faces right

@cut to zone 3

@CECILIA3 enters from left to screen left

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.812 159 143

@CECILIA3 is rear

@CECILIA3 faces left

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 faces right

@pause for a beat

    CECILIA3

(Where is it?)

@CECILIA3 is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop_rear

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 faces right

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 faces left

@CECILIA3 is reach_kneel_neutral_rear

@CECILIA3 is idle AND CECILIA3 faces right

    CECILIA3

(Found it!)

    CECILIA3 (breathe_deep)

(This is happening.)

@CECILIA3 exits right

INT.BATHROOMDAY

@CECILIA3 enters from left to screen left

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 1.280 441 20

music off

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

sound toilet_flush

@pause for a beat

    CECILIA3

(Now, I wait.)

music music_stressbeat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

    CECILIA3

(Oh, the wait is | animation:flash, color:red |killing |reset| me.)

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 165 163

@CECILIA3 is deepbreath

INT.BATHROOMDAY with PREGTEST2 in zone 1 at layer 0

@CECILIA3 spot 0.929 165 163

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 277 168 AND overlay 6540809011986432_PREGTEST2 shifts to 94 239 in zone 1 AND overlay 6540809011986432_PREGTEST2 scales to 1.000 1.000 in zone 1

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 55 160

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 277 168

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 55 160

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 277 168

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 55 160

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 277 168

@CECILIA3 walks to spot 0.929 130 166

@CECILIA3 is breathe_deep

@CECILIA3 is rear

@pause for a beat

@CECILIA3 is idle

INT.BATHROOMDAY with PREGTEST2 in zone 1

@CECILIA3 spot 0.929 130 166 AND overlay 6540809011986432_PREGTEST2 shifts to 119 209 AND overlay 6540809011986432_PREGTEST2 scales to 1.000 1.000

@pause for a beat

CECILIA3

(Here we go.)

INT.SURPRISE2

@pause for a beat

INT.PREGTEST

@zoom reset

@cut to zone 2

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR

I was surprised.

}

what exactly do you want this is what I get from you’re script if I read it

alright so first of all it seems like you only have on outfit here ? is this correct? (the I don’t care outfit??)

then she is going to a pharmamcy to collect a pregnancy test
then she does the test and you use overlays to show the test

and now you want her to dress up again?? however this time you give her the “I don’t care outfit” and the “Just sexy outfit” and then you do everything again ??

now I don’t really understand what you want maybe you want something to happen based on her previous choices or something is that what you want ? @SylvianaLove

you choose two outfits

i was trying to fix it so dont care wasnt supposed to be written down twice

so each outfit you choose has the same scenes and movement but the only difference is the picture i wrote down on here is different that matches the outfit you choose

uhm @Dara.Amarie can you help perhaps?

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Are the backgrounds like art scenes? Both with each outfit?

label choice_outfit
CECILIA
What should I wear?
choice (pregtest)
“I don’t care”{
@CECILIA changes into idontcare
}
“Just be sexy”{
@CECILIA changes into canstillbesexy
}
CECILIA
Wear this?
choice
“Yes”{
goto story_merge
}
“No”{
goto choice_outfit
}

label story_merge
script here for pharmacy

if(pregtest is “I don’t care”){
Background here
}else{
Background here for just be sexy outfit
}

Is this what you meant?

INT.SURPRISE and INT.SURPRISE2
is the art scenes
one is for sexy and the other is for dont care

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hey guys ! i am new on episode and i need help. Please tell how to give credits for backgrounds or overlays in script . I don’t know how to do it…

There are several ways how to give credits.

some do it with the narrator on the beginning or end of the chapter where thay write all the credits together… something like: (The text is up to you)

NARR
credit for backgrounds and overlays to @NAME and @NAME2

Or you can make it as readers message in the spot where you use the credited background or overlay.

It will look something like this:
readerMessage Art scene by talented artist @NAME

thank you so much for your help!

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can someone please help me

@Jade.epi gave you an answer. Just put your art scenes in if/else code.

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no. that didnt make sense. preg test is another background shes adding to the choose your outfit

theres two outfits and the art scenes are on the bottom. when they choose an outfit the art scene matching the outfit will go to it

and i answer her question when i post the name of the art i needed to add.

label choice_outfit
CECILIA
What should I wear?
choice (pregtest)
“I don’t care”{
@CECILIA changes into idontcare
}
“Just be sexy”{
@CECILIA changes into canstillbesexy
}
CECILIA
Wear this?
choice
“Yes”{
goto story_merge
}
“No”{
goto choice_outfit
}

label story_merge
script here for pharmacy

if(pregtest is “I don’t care”){
Background here for I don’t care outfit
(INT. SURPRISE)
}else{
Background here for just be sexy outfit
(INT. SURPRISE1)
}

’pregtest’ is the name of the choice so the script will remember it when you want to put the background depending on outfit choice

trying to test it out but when you put }else{ its an error

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um…are the art scenes backgrounds or overlays?

Because I do not get what you mean with (art scenes are on the bottom)

What does the error say?

Can someone pleas tell me how much maximum time it takes for backgrounds and overlays approval?