Need help please lol:/

So I have a weird problem where I’m trying to do hair/make-up choices.1 hair template itself and hair and make-up template later.I preview it and for no reason when I press the “Yes I’m done button” she walked to the next scene (whole different background) then idk it just skipped my whole scene and just took it all day the way to the hair and make-up choice.

Here’s my script
label hairstyles
@speechbubble is 151 279 to 100%
NARR
Hairstyle Options.

choice
“High Ponytail.”{
@LIZ changes hair into High Ponytail
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into High Ponytail
goto hairstyles
}
“Beach Wave.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto hairstyles
}
“Fishtail Braid.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Fishtail Braid
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto hairstyles
}
“I’m done.”{
NARRATOR
Are you sure?
choice
“Yea- just move on alreadyyy.”{
@speechbubble is 148 267 to 100% with tail_top_right
&RANDOMLIZ2ND is talk_angry_arms_crossed
LIZ (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
I know right?
&RANDOMLIZ2ND is talk_exhausted
LIZ (talk_exhausted)
Like just move on I’m already tried.
}
“Nah sorry-.”{
&RANDOMLIZ2ND is eyeroll_subtle
LIZ (eyeroll_subtle)
Fine…
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
goto hairstyles
}
}
2nd template
label hair_lipxx
@speechbubble is 150 262 to 100%
NARR
What do you want to change?

choice
“Lipstick.”{
goto lipstickxx
}
“Hairstyle.”{
goto hairstylesxx
}
“I’m done.”{

    NARRATOR
Are you sure?

choice
“YES JUST MOVE ON WITH DA STORY.”{
@speechbubble is 156 316 to 100% with tail_top_right
&RANDOMLIZ2ND is talk_neutral_deny
LIZ (talk_neutral_deny)
Okay but don’t be mad when you end up don’t wanting what you chose.

goto hair_lip_end_xx

}
“Girl nah your hair and make-up ain’t fine!!!.”{

@LIZ is eyeroll_subtle AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is eyeroll_subtle

    LIZ
(Okay then...)

@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed

goto hair_lipxx

}
}

label lipstickxx

    NARR
Lip colors.

choice
“Scarlet.”{
@LIZ changes mouthColor into Scarlet
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes mouthColor into Scarlet
@add Lipstick to LIZ
@add Lipstick to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is apply_lipstick AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is apply_lipstick
@pause for 3.5
@remove Lipstick from LIZ
@remove Lipstick from RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
goto lipstickxx
}
“Terracotta.”{
@LIZ changes mouthColor into Terracotta
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes mouthColor into Terracotta
@add Lipstick to LIZ
@add Lipstick to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is apply_lipstick AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is apply_lipstick
@pause for 3.5
@remove Lipstick from LIZ
@remove Lipstick from RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
goto lipstickxx
}
“Cherry Red”{
@LIZ changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
@add Lipstick to LIZ
@add Lipstick to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is apply_lipstick AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is apply_lipstick
@pause for 3.5
@remove Lipstick from LIZ
@remove Lipstick from RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
goto lipstickxx
}
“Menu.”{
goto hair_lipxx
}

label hairstylesxx

    NARR
Hairstyles.

choice
“Straight.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Straight
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Straight
@add Hair Brush to LIZ
@add Hair Brush to RANDOMLIZ2ND
&LIZ is primp_brush_hair AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LIZ
@remove Hair Brush from RANDOMLIZ2ND
&LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
@pause for 0.5
goto hairstylesxx
}
“Beach Wave.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@add Hair Brush to LIZ
@add Hair Brush to RANDOMLIZ2ND
&LIZ is primp_brush_hair AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LIZ
@remove Hair Brush from RANDOMLIZ2ND
&LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
@pause for 0.5
goto hairstylesxx
}
“Long Feathered.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Long Feathered
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Long Feathered
@add Hair Brush to LIZ
@add Hair Brush to RANDOMLIZ2ND
&LIZ is primp_brush_hair AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from LIZ
@remove Hair Brush from RANDOMLIZ2ND
&LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
@pause for 0.5
goto hairstylesxx
}
“Menu.”{
goto hair_lipxx
}

label hair_lip_end_xx

readerMessage On insta!!! @Elira_M_Episode with messageTitle Make-up and hair template credit

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@Dara.Amarie templets scrip coding is here…it has hair color, hairstyle, lip color…and makeup and hairstyles. Here’s the link to it if you need!

There is nothing wrong with the templates I have tested them and there is no command to walk to the different background so it seems to me the problem must be with what you have added

Also in your template is no button with the name “Yes I’m done button”
so I don’t know which one makes you problem the first one or the one by the second template?
can you show me your whole script and not just the templates ?

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Ik it’s not a command to walk to a different background I’m saying that the character walks to the next scene and then it just completes skip the whole scene and then takes it to the 2nd template

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well in what you have above I dont see any scene between the templates… so which part is skipped?

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Imma put some of it rn

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label hairstyles
@speechbubble is 151 279 to 100%
NARR
Hairstyle Options.

choice
“High Ponytail.”{
@LIZ changes hair into High Ponytail
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into High Ponytail
goto hairstyles
}
“Beach Wave.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto hairstyles
}
“Fishtail Braid.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Fishtail Braid
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto hairstyles
}
“I’m done.”{
NARRATOR
Are you sure?
choice
“Yea- just move on alreadyyy.”{
@speechbubble is 148 267 to 100% with tail_top_right
&RANDOMLIZ2ND is talk_angry_arms_crossed
LIZ (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
I know right?
&RANDOMLIZ2ND is talk_exhausted
LIZ (talk_exhausted)
Like just move on I’m already tried.
}
“Nah sorry-.”{
&RANDOMLIZ2ND is eyeroll_subtle
LIZ (eyeroll_subtle)
Fine…
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
goto hairstyles
}
}
@add Hair Brush to LIZ
@add Hair Brush to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is primp_brush_hair AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 1.4
&LIZ is dustoff_loop
@RANDOMLIZ2ND is dustoff_loop
@remove Hair Brush from LIZ
@remove Hair Brush from RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
@pause for 3.5
@LIZ exits left AND LIZ is walk_exhausted AND RANDOMLIZ2ND exits left AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is walk_exhausted
@pause for 0.0
music off
@transition iris out black 2
INT. BEDROOM-NIGHT2
&cut to zone 1
@zoom on 113 275 to 171% in 0
@LIZ changes mouthColor into Terracotta
@LIZ changes eyebrows into Defined Natural
@LIZ changes face into Oval
@LIZ changes eyes into Upturned Feline
if (LIZ =1) {
@LIZ changes into SoftieBed1
} elif (LIZ =2) {
@LIZ changes into lazy
} else {
@LIZ changes into Braandunderwear
}if (remember choice is “High Ponytail”) {
@LIZ changes hair into High Ponytail
}elif (remember choice is “Fishtail Braid”) {
@LIZ changes hair into Fishtail Braid
@LIZ spot 1.280 -86 2 in zone 1
@LIZ moves to layer 3
@LIZ walks to spot 1.280 146 -19 in zone 1 then LIZ is arms_crossed
This is part of the first template

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there is someting wrong with your if/elif/else

first what I notice that you use remembered choice but if it should be the choice right above it you have there nothing to make the choice remembered.

You havent named this choice for hairs .

Also you made the second if kina part of the first if… I have never seen it written this way

}if

I would write it on separate lines because the bracket belongs to the else from different if

}
if

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Can you just write the remember choice I should have on both templates because I’m bad at doing this lol…

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I myself prefer gains to named choices but:

naming a choice is something like adding code word

normal choice looks like this:

choice
“first option”…

named choice looks like this

choice (HAIRS)
“first option”…

in this example the word HAIRS is the name of this choice.

And later when you want to reacall this remembered choice you will write the conditions like this

if (HAIRS is “first option”){

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imma try

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Still didn’t work but I’ll just try something myself

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so I deleted the first template cuz it has caused more problems but when I plus the yes I’m done button, it just sends it back to the menu and doesn’t end that scene
label hair_lipxx
@speechbubble is 150 262 to 100%
NARR
What do you want to change?

choice
“Lipstick.”{
goto lipstickxx
}
“Hairstyle.”{
goto hairstylesxx
}
“I’m done.”{

    NARRATOR
Are you sure?

choice
“YES JUST MOVE ON WITH DA STORY.”{
@speechbubble is 156 316 to 100% with tail_top_right
&RANDOMLIZ2ND is talk_neutral_deny
LIZ (talk_neutral_deny)
Okay but don’t be mad when you end up don’t wanting what you chose.

}
“Girl nah your hair and make-up ain’t fine!!!.”{

@LIZ is eyeroll_subtle AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is eyeroll_subtle

    LIZ
(Okay then...)

@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed

goto hair_lipxx

}
}

label lipstickxx

    NARR
Lip colors.

choice
“Scarlet.”{
@LIZ changes mouthColor into Scarlet
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes mouthColor into Scarlet
@add Lipstick to LIZ
@add Lipstick to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is apply_lipstick AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is apply_lipstick
@pause for 3.5
@remove Lipstick from LIZ
@remove Lipstick from RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
goto lipstickxx
}
“Terracotta.”{
@LIZ changes mouthColor into Terracotta
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes mouthColor into Terracotta
@add Lipstick to LIZ
@add Lipstick to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is apply_lipstick AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is apply_lipstick
@pause for 3.5
@remove Lipstick from LIZ
@remove Lipstick from RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
goto lipstickxx
}
“Cherry Red”{
@LIZ changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
@add Lipstick to LIZ
@add Lipstick to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is apply_lipstick AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is apply_lipstick
@pause for 3.5
@remove Lipstick from LIZ
@remove Lipstick from RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
goto lipstickxx
}
“Menu.”{
goto hair_lipxx
}

label hairstylesxx

    NARR
Hairstyles.

choice
“Straight.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Straight
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Straight
@add Hair Brush to LIZ
@add Hair Brush to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is primp_brush_hair AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 2.5
@remove Hair Brush from LIZ
@remove Hair Brush from RANDOMLIZ2ND
&LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
@pause for 0.5
goto hairstylesxx
}
“Beach Wave.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@add Hair Brush to LIZ
@add Hair Brush to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is primp_brush_hair AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 2.5
@remove Hair Brush from LIZ
@remove Hair Brush from RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
@pause for 0.5
goto hairstylesxx
}
“Long Feathered.”{
@LIZ changes hair into Long Feathered
@RANDOMLIZ2ND changes hair into Long Feathered
@add Hair Brush to LIZ
@add Hair Brush to RANDOMLIZ2ND
@LIZ is primp_brush_hair AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 2.5
@remove Hair Brush from LIZ
@remove Hair Brush from RANDOMLIZ2ND
&LIZ is idle_arms_crossed AND RANDOMLIZ2ND is idle_arms_crossed
@pause for 0.5
goto hairstylesxx
}
“Menu.”{
goto hair_lipxx
}

readerMessage On insta!!! @Elira_M_Episode with messageTitle Make-up and hair template credit

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you must add another label at the end where you want to go after the “I am done” button

and add goto to that label as a last command in the yes I am done choice

so under the readermessage you have at the end add for example

label go_story

and under the
OK but dont be mad…
add

goto go_story

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tysm that was a long time to get my problems fix

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Unexpected block end error can ya help me lol.
if (LIZ =1) {
@LIZ changes into SoftieBed1
} elif (LIZ =2) {
@LIZ changes into lazy
} else {
@LIZ changes into Braandunderwear
}
}elif (remember choice is “High Ponytail”) {
@LIZ changes hair into High Ponytail
}elif (remember choice is “Beach Wave”) {
@LIZ changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
}

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if this if if else inside if else then these is one if mising

The error starts at

The first bracket their saying that something is wrong

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wrong is the “remember choice” I guess

is your choice really named so?

Hold on Imma screenshot it

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