Need help with 1st episode and Story Title

#1

Ok my story is going to be like a Twilight/Pretty Little Liars/Teen Wolf/Vampire Diaries kinda of story and I need a good beginning scene because I always make one and then end up changing it. But I would also like to hear some story name ideas please this would really help me out alot. Thank you to anyone who responds

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#2

Will your MC be female and will there be a few love interests?

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#3

Yes it is female lead and there is going to be a love triangle

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#4

I don’t have any titles, but I usually use song titles for mine.

Such as my story (unrealeased) “Princes Of The Universe”. A song by Queen.
“Free Falling” (Tom Petty), etc.

Just a song that can kinda sum up your story without giving too much away.

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#6

I’m not sure where you’re going plot wise so I wouldn’t know how to start.
Maybe do a flash forward to her wedding day or coronation?
Titles:
Midnight Queen
Heart of Creature
Tears from the Shadows
To Love a Monster

Or mix/swap any of those! Like Heart of a Monster, or Shadow Queen

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#7

It’s a vampire and werewolf love triangle with a “wizard” (Enchantress)

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#8

Ooooh nice! I love fantasy/magic stories lol
Maybe you can open the episode with a curse or pact that as an enchantress from an ancient family, she must marry/have a child with another mythical entity. Or for fun and drama, she “has” to marry one, but have a child with the other.

The wizard’s womb belongs to the moon.
But she will wed the creature most dead.
When the blood bride is sworn, the heir will be born.

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#9

That sounds pretty cool!!! I want to have many plot twist throughout the story and I know who I want the girl to end up with. What I have so far is that Aria and her sister just moved to a new town. Where strange things happen and people have gone missing. I already have the villain and I know how I’m going to incorporate it into the story. Aria and her love interest are in high school so idk where to go from there

#10

Hi! I was wondering maybe for your title it can be “Enchanting Love” or “Love Spell”

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#11

Ooooooooo I like that… it has a nice ring to it

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#12

I think a good beginning scene should be a flash forward with MC during a dramatic moment like a final showdown with villain then cuts away or a flashback showing something related to MC’s ancestors or even the villain.
Sometimes high school beginnings feel the same as others unless you do a montage of MC saying hi or chatting with classmates then showing a missing poster of each one.

#13

Ok cool thanks for the feed back:)

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#14

No problem! Good luck and keep writing :purple_heart:

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#15

what’s the plot?

#16

The plot is kinda of a twilight kind of story but not really idk how to explain it

#17

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