Need help with description!

crap its a little too long

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NOOO FSIUFHSDKJF

here lemme try and re-word some stuff to make it shorter

try this one?

Still mourning over the loss of her mother, Luna, is searching for answers to find closure. But happens when she meets a dangerous man, who might have some answers for her?

if not, i can try again

YOUR WELCOMEEE !! and yea thats okay ! :two_hearts: :two_hearts:

thank you :smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts: i’ll try that in like 5 mins i’m not near my computer right now

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I think you forgot a what between but and happens

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does that mean it’s good? :sweat_smile:

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It’s a very good one actually yes :heart_eyes:
But I liked a lot the first one you wrote
Like if you take that one and change the words after the …it would be perfect but the other one is pretty good too :blush:

thank you!

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Np!!

Np!! Everybody makes mistakes

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YAYY It fit perfectly

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WAIT I FORGOT A WORD

Still mourning over the loss of her mother, Luna, is searching for answers to find closure. But what happens when she meets a dangerous man, who might have some answers for her?

I put that dw :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

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ohhhh okay ! yea i just forgot to add the what haha. but npppp :two_hearts:

I forgot to ask what’s your insta for credit?

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its sydd.stories :two_hearts:

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