Need help with dress game


#1

CECILIA2

(What to wear on this fine, cold day?)

@pause for a beat

label choice_outfits1

    CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)

...

choice
"Sexy time"[
@CECILIA2 exits right

@CECILIA2 changes into Winter

@CECILIA2 enters from right to screen center

    CECILIA2 (flirt_wink_atcamerat)
(I know he would love this! His hands slowly going up my legs!)
    CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)
(This one?)

@pause for a beat

]
“Going for a kina cute look”[
@CECILIA2 exits right
@CECILIA2 changes into winter1
@CECILIA2 enters from right to screen center
CECILIA2 (eyeroll_sarcastic)
(It is cold outside. Cover all my jewels.)
CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)
(This one?)
@pause for a beat

]
“Hot mama”[
@CECILIA2 exits right
@CECILIA2 changes into Winter3
@CECILIA2 enters from right to screen ceter
CECILIA2 (primp_neutral)
(He wouldn’t keep his hands off of me!)
CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)
(This one?_)
@pause for a beat
]

choice
"Yes"[
CECILIA2 (selfie_phone)

(Time to go.)

]
“No, not yet.”[

goto choice_outfits1
]

@pause for a beat

Somewhere I wrote something wrong but can’t figure it out


#2

Change ] to } and it should work :slight_smile:
You used wrong brackets.


#3

ok now it saying by where it says Yes
it must follow dialog not a branch


#4

Oh. I’m sorry I’ve missed that. You need to have a dialogue before the word choice.

 NARR

Are you sure you want to wear that?
choice
"Yes"{
CECILIA2 (selfie_phone)

(Time to go.)


#5

oh ok thank you so much


#6

for each outfit, can I change each story differently then connect the end the same story

if so how would I do that


#7

Of course, you can, you can write scenes inside the choice or use labels.


#8

so how would I do that


#9

Just let me change your dressing game a bit :slight_smile:


#10

okie


#11

to give you an idea, shes going to school and each outfit I wanted her teacher Caleb make a remark for each one


#12

hmmm… for this would be easier to use gains… so you don’t have to copy all the scenes just to bring it back this choice when you need it. I’ll change your dressing game and I’ll explain it to you what to do :slight_smile:


#13

okie


#14
    CECILIA2
(What to wear on this fine, cold day?)

@pause for a beat

label choice_outfits1

    CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)

...

choice
"Sexy time"{
@CECILIA2 exits right

@CECILIA2 changes into Winter

@CECILIA2 enters from right to screen center

    CECILIA2 (flirt_wink_atcamera)
(I know he would love this! His hands slowly going up my legs!)

    CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)
(This one?)

choice
"Yes" {
gain sexy_time

} “No” {
goto choice_outfits1
}

}
“Going for a kina cute look”{
@CECILIA2 exits right
@CECILIA2 changes into winter1
@CECILIA2 enters from right to screen center
CECILIA2 (eyeroll_sarcastic)
(It is cold outside. Cover all my jewels.)
CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)
(This one?)
choice
"Yes" {
gain cute_look

} “No” {
goto choice_outfits1
}

}
“Hot mama”{
@CECILIA2 exits right
@CECILIA2 changes into Winter3
@CECILIA2 enters from right to screen center
CECILIA2 (primp_neutral)
(He wouldn’t keep his hands off of me!)
CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)
(This one?_)
choice
"Yes" {
gain hot_mama

} “No” {
goto choice_outfits1
}
}


#15

So each time you want this choice to have an outcome write:

if (sexy_time) {
#Here goes scenes or reactions when she wears in “Sexy Time”

} elif (cute_look) {
#Here goes scenes or reactions when she wears in “Going for a kina cute look”

}else {
#Here goes scenes or reactions when she wears in “Hot mama”

}

Let me know if you understand x


#16

how would I change it to a different setting. like she changes into her room then goes to the school where Caleb is


#17

Change the background. :slight_smile:

Just write
INT. BACKGROUND - DAY (choose your background and place characters on it)


#18

ok if i have problems i will let you know
thank you


#19

when adding a sound is it sound audience-boo


#20
    CECILIA2

(What to wear on this fine, cold day?)

@pause for a beat

label choice_outfits1

    CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)

...

choice
"Sexy time"{
@CECILIA2 exits right
@zoom reset
@CECILIA2 changes into Winter
@pause for a beat
@CECILIA2 enters from right to screen center
CECILIA2 (flirt_wink_atcamera)
(I know he would love this! His hands slowly going up my legs!)

@pause for a beat

    CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)
(This one?)

choice
"Yes" {
CECILIA2 (selfie_phone)
(Time to go.)

music off

INT. CLASSROOM BLACKBOARD - DAY

@CALEB spot 1.280 168 62

    CALEB (talk_read_book_open_neutral_loop)

Welcome class! You will be taking your exams today.

sound audience-boo

@pause for a beat

    CALEB (talk_read_book_open_neutral_loop)

Incase you forgotten. Good luck to you all.

sound audience_laughter_young

@CECILIA enters from right to screen right

@CALEB faces left

@CALEB is flirt_coy
CECILIA2 (talk_excited_happy)

Sorry, if I am late for my exams. I-

    CALEB (idle_awkward_uneasy_loop)

(Stay focuse!)

@pause for a beat

(That skirt is revealing so much. Is it getting hot in here?)

    CALEB (idle_awkward_scratch_loop)

(Her rambling on. Seeing her sweet lips move.)

    CALEB (idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop)

(I need to snap out of this!)

@CECILIA2 is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop

    CALEB (talk_flirt_charming)

Cecilia you are fine-

@CECILIA2 is laugh_giggle

@CECILIA2 is idle_loop

    CALEB (talk_awkward_loop)

I mean you are not late.

@CALEB is deepbreath AND CECILIA2 exits left

} “No” {
goto choice_outfits1
}

}
“Going for a kinda cute look”{
@CECILIA2 exits right
@CECILIA2 changes into winter1
@pause for a beat
@CECILIA2 enters from right to screen center
CECILIA2 (eyeroll_sarcastic)
(It is cold outside. Cover all my jewels.)
CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)
(This one?)
choice
"Yes" {
CECILIA2 (selfie_phone)
(Time to go.)

music off

INT. CLASSROOM BLACKBOARD - DAY

@CALEB spot 1.280 168 62

    CALEB (talk_read_book_open_neutral_loop)

Welcome class! You will be taking your exams today.

sound audience-boo

@pause for a beat

    CALEB (talk_read_book_open_neutral_loop)

Incase you forgotten. Good luck to you all.

sound audience_laughter_young

@CECILIA enters from right to screen right

@CALEB faces left

@CALEB is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

    CECILIA2 (talk_excited_happy)

Sorry, if I am late for my exams. I-

    CALEB

(That's an ok outfit.)

    CALEB (think_rubchin)

(I mean, I can see it as a tease. Covering up everything. Making me guess what's under there.)

@CECILIA2 is idle_happy_loop

    CALEB (talk_armsraised_neutral)

You are not late. Please have a seat.

@CALEB is idle_loop AND CECILIA2 exits left

} “No” {
goto choice_outfits1
}

}
“Hot mama”{
@CECILIA2 exits right
@CECILIA2 changes into Winter3
@pause for a beat
@CECILIA2 enters from right to screen center
CECILIA2 (primp_neutral)
(He wouldn’t keep his hands off of me!)
CECILIA2 (think_rubchin)
(This one?)
choice
"Yes" {
CECILIA2 (selfie_phone)
(Time to go.)

music off

INT. CLASSROOM BLACKBOARD - DAY

@CALEB spot 1.280 168 62

    CALEB (talk_read_book_open_neutral_loop)

Welcome class! You will be taking your exams today.

sound audience-boo

@pause for a beat

    CALEB (talk_read_book_open_neutral_loop)

Incase you forgotten. Good luck to you all.

sound audience_laughter_young

@CECILIA enters from right to screen right

@CALEB faces left

@CALEB is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop

@CALEB is deepbreath

    CECILIA2 (talk_excited_happy)

Sorry, if I am late for my exams. I-

    CALEB (idle_happy_pose)

(Just breathe, just breathe.)

@CALEB is deepbreath

    CALEB (idle_happy_loop)

(Just want to rip that jacket off! And feel along her chest!)

@CALEB is deepbreath

    CALEB (talk_agree_happy)

You are not late Ceclila. Please have a seat over there.

@CALEB is idle_happy_loop AND CECILIA2 exits left

} “No” {
goto choice_outfits1
}

}

it says excepted dialog, found “sound audience-boo” instead. did you forget to capitalize the first word in the sentence?