I have this scene here and I feel it goes to fast. anyone who could help me add more to it
the story if anyone wonder
INT. LA SUSHI RESTAURANT - NIGHT with TABLE CHINESE to 1.037 -5 44 in zone 3
@cut to zone 3
@overlay TABLE CHINESE moves to layer 20
@WADE spot 0.667 45 210 in zone 3 AND WALTER spot 0.667 137 210 in zone 3 AND MR LORATO spot 0.667 256 210 in zone 3 AND YURI spot 0.704 199 260 in zone 3 AND JANE spot 0.703 -49 269 in zone 3
@WADE faces right AND WALTER faces right
@YURI moves to layer 0 AND WALTER moves to layer 2 AND WADE moves to layer 3 AND MR LORATO moves to layer 4 AND JANE moves to layer 1
@overlay TABLE CHINESE moves to layer 5
@YURI walks to spot 0.612 -74 281 in 3
@zoom on 960 242 to 324% in 0
MR LORATO (talk_gossip)
So how is it going in school Wade
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WADE (talk_happy_agree)
Alright, Uncle
WADE (talk_happy_hand_raised)
We are getting ready for summer vacation
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MR LORATO (talk_happy_smile)
Are you going on camp this year
@zoom on 652 242 to 324% in 0
WADE (talk_shrug)
No i am to old for that.
WADE (talk_sheepish)
Also there is mom's wedding.
@zoom on 770 231 to 324% in 0
@WALTER faces left
WALTER (talk_arms_crossed)
Has she turn full bridezilla yet
@zoom on 652 242 to 324% in 0
&JANE walks to spot 0.703 197 243 in 2
WADE (talk_awkward)
No, but Billie has
@pause for a beat
@zoom reset
@WALTER faces right
&WALTER is arms_crossed AND WADE is blush AND MR LORATO is laugh_crack_up
JANE (talk_afraid)
Exusme me, are you Don Lorato
@zoom on 931 262 to 503% in 0
&JANE is idle
MR LORATO (talk_neutral)
Yes can i help you miss
MR LORATO (idle_awkward)
(why does she seem so familar)
@zoom on 682 225 to 239% in 0
&WALTER is think_loop
WADE (think)
(isnt she the girl who asked about sushi)
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JANE (talk_awkward)
My name is [JANE] [LAST]
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MR LORATO (talk_repulsed)
Did you just say [JANE]
(That name- that is why is familar)
&JANE is deepbreath
@zoom on 862 331 to 445% in 0
&MR LORATO is idle
JANE (talk_afraid)
Yeah you knew my mom [MOM] [LAST]
@zoom on 934 273 to 445% in 0
&WADE is shush
MR LORATO (talk_think)
I dont think i know anyone with that name
@zoom on 859 320 to 464% in 0
JANE (talk_sheepish)
No you knew her as [JANE] justice
@zoom on 944 265 to 464% in 0
MR LORATO (shocked)
(what the actual hell)
MR LORATO (blush)
(I admit the similarity is amazing )
(Is Walter pulling a joke on me?,)
@zoom on 675 238 to 210% in 0
&WALTER is idle_jawdrop
WADE
( I have no idea what is going on)
@zoom on 939 266 to 221% in 0
@MR LORATO spot 0.698 265 245
@MR LORATO is stand_up
@MR LORATO is applaud_loop
MR LORATO (talk_happy_hands_open)
Okay Walter very funny you had me, good joke
@zoom on 675 238 to 193% in 0
WALTER (talk_neutral_deny)
I am not behind this
@zoom on 851 331 to 445% in 0
&MR LORATO is idle
JANE (talk_scared_flashlight)
I am not jokeing
@zoom on 933 324 to 445% in 0
MR LORATO (talk_angry_accuse)
Listen here girl, [JANE] Justice has been dead in 16 years
@zoom on 840 359 to 445% in 0
JANE (talk_sheepish)
Well actually she is kinda alive
JANE (talk_sad_loop)
Also she was an undercover agent
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MR LORATO (talk_startled)
You are speaking gibarice
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WALTER (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
I think you should leave miss
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&WADE is startled_surprised AND WALTER is talk_confused_mind_blown AND MR LORATO is idle_jawdrop
JANE (scream)
YOU ARE MY DAD!!!
@zoom on 787 255 to 520% in 0
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 673 245 to 520% in 0
@JANE is flirt_fingersnap
@zoom on 919 327 to 520% in 0
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 849 328 to 582% in 0
JANE
(Why the hell did i scream)
@add Knife Clean to YURI
&YURI spot 0.390 46 319
@zoom on 921 328 to 582% in 0
MR LORATO (talk_angry)
Listen i do not find this funny
&zoom on 902 338 to 211% in 1
&JANE walks to spot 0.613 201 289 in 1 AND MR LORATO walks to spot 0.638 242 278 in 1 AND JANE is walk_scared AND MR LORATO is walk_rear AND WALTER walks to spot 0.667 100 209 in 1 AND MR LORATO faces right AND JANE faces right
@pause for 1
@YURI moves to layer 3 AND JANE moves to layer 2
&overlay TRAY create
@overlay 5973885830823936_TRAY shifts to 19 198 in zone 3
@overlay 5973885830823936_TRAY scales to 0.164 0.164 in zone 3
@overlay TRAY opacity 1 in 0
@overlay TRAY moves to layer 8
@overlay TABLE CHINESE moves to layer 9
&YURI walks to spot 0.589 154 298 in 3 AND YURI is walk_neutral AND JANE is idle_terrified AND MR LORATO is rear
&overlay 5973885830823936_TRAY shifts to 128 228 in zone 3 in 3
@overlay 5973885830823936_TRAY scales to 0.164 0.164 in zone 3 in 3
@remove Knife Clean from YURI
@remove overlay TRAY
@add Knife Bloody to YURI
&overlay OPENTRAY create
@overlay 5973885830823936_OPENTRAY shifts to 126 231 in zone 3
@overlay 5973885830823936_OPENTRAY scales to 0.165 0.165 in zone 3
@overlay OPENTRAY opacity 1 in 0
@pause for 0.1
&YURI is startled_surprised AND MR LORATO is mortified AND JANE is slap_face_receive
&overlay 5973885830823936_OPENTRAY shifts to 167 133 in zone 3 in 2
@overlay 5973885830823936_OPENTRAY scales to 0.165 0.165 in zone 3 in 2
@MR LORATO faces left AND JANE faces left
YURI (talk_startled)
I am so sorry
@overlay REDBLOOD create
@overlay 5973885830823936_REDBLOOD shifts to 210 237 in zone 3
@overlay 5973885830823936_REDBLOOD scales to 0.043 0.043 in zone 3
@overlay REDBLOOD opacity 1 in 0
&JANE is idle
YURI (talk_unsure)
Oh no your are bleading
&overlay NAPKIN create
@overlay 5973885830823936_NAPKIN shifts to 227 217 in zone 3
@overlay 5973885830823936_NAPKIN scales to 0.127 0.127 in zone 3
@overlay NAPKIN opacity 1 in 0
@MR LORATO spot 0.638 261 276
@zoom on 871 256 to 626% in 0
@pause for 0.1
&overlay NAPKIN shifts to 208 233 in zone 3 in 0.7
&overlay NAPKIN scales to 0.127 0.127 in zone 3 in 0.7
MR LORATO (admire)
Here i have a napkin
@remove overlay REDBLOOD
@remove overlay NAPKIN
@zoom on 902 338 to 211% in 0
@JANE moves to layer 4
@JANE walks to spot 0.433 82 379 in 1 AND JANE is run_cry AND MR LORATO is idle_awkward
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 878 220 to 893% in 0
&MR LORATO is idle_jawdrop
&overlay BLOOD PAPER create
@overlay 5973885830823936_BLOOD PAPER shifts to 215 212 in zone 3
@overlay 5973885830823936_BLOOD PAPER scales to 0.141 0.141 in zone 3
@overlay BLOOD PAPER opacity 1 in 0
@pause for a beat