Need help with outfit choices please!

Before I carry on with the other 2 choices to choose from (out fit changing choices)
Where am I going wrong?

I think you need another bracket, depending how you want your choices to be… :thinking:

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Where does the extra bracket need to go?

How do you want your choices to be? Like three choices (for clothing) then if I want to keep it or change?

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Yes , that’s exactly what I want to happen :slight_smile:


The red dots are where a bracket should be placed.

I’m not sure about this. I’m not an expert myself. If it’s wrong you could go ask on a helping thread I’m sure they could help you!

still showing an X next to line 2207 :confused:

or maybe you can’t put [text]? I’m really not sure :sweat:

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no worries, thanks for trying, means alot :slight_smile:

You can still go to a helping thread, I’m sure they’ll be able to help you more! :sweat_smile:

This is the code I use for changing outfits. You have a lot of errors in your script, so try replacing that with this code and filling it out

label dressing_game

CHARACTER (think_rubchin)
(What should I wear?)

choice
“Outfit 1” {

Dialogue here.

}

“Outfit 2” {

Dialogue here.

}

“Outfit 3” {

Dialogue here.

}

@pause for a beat

CHARACTER (think_rubchin)
(Is this what I want to wear?)

choice
“Yes” {

Dialogue here.

}

“Try something else” {

goto dressing_game

}


I’ve got a different error now lol :’)
any advice? :slight_smile:

It seems like you have choices within choices within choices. You can’t have a choice within a choice. End your each outfit choice with a } bracket after Katie comments about the outfits. Then have another outfit choice right after, not your decision choice after. After all three outfit choices are done THEN you can have a separate choice option for your decision.

I am now convinced choice is not a word now. :sleepy:

Or just send your script, I can try to fix it for ya. :sweat_smile:

lol trust me I am confused with it all, I got the tip from another forum haha

Here is my script if you can alter it that would be fab :slight_smile:

INT. WALKINCLOSET - DAY
@KYRA changes into KYRA_default
@KATIE changes into KATIE_default
@cut to zone 2
@zoom on 539 380 to 106% in 0
@KYRA spot 0.903 98 158 AND KYRA faces right AND KATIE spot 0.921 231 150 AND KATIE faces left

label dressing_game
KYRA (talk_neutral_loop)
Which outfit do you think I should wear? I have 3 outfits to choose from:

choice
“Jumper and Jeans” {
@KYRA changes into KYRA_date1
@KYRA is dustoff_neutral_loop
KATIE (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Might be a bit too warm, it’s still a heatwave outside.
It’s up to you though.
KYRA (think_rubchin)
(Is this what I want to wear?)
choice
“No”
goto dressing_game
{
“Yes”{
KYRA (talk_pointup_happy)
I’m happy with this outfit
KATIE (talk_excited_happy)
Took you long enough
@KYRA is laugh_giggle AND KATIE is laugh_giggle
}

“Red Jacket and Jeans” {
@KYRA changes into KYRA_date2
@KYRA is dustoff_neutral_loop
KATIE (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Very stylish girl. But what do you think?
KYRA (think_rubchin)
(Is this what I want to wear)
choice
“No”
goto dressing_game
{
“Yes”{
KYRA (talk_pointup_happy)
I’m happy with this outfit
KATIE (talk_excited_happy)
Took you long enough
@KYRA is laugh_giggle AND KATIE is laugh_giggle
}

“Jacket and Skirt” {
@KYRA changes into KYRA_date3
@KYRA is dustoff_neutral_loop
KATIE (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Looking hot girl! But what do you think?
KYRA (think_rubchin)
(Is this what I want to wear)
choice
“No”
goto dressing_game
{
“Yes”{
KYRA (talk_pointup_happy)
I’m happy with this outfit
KATIE (talk_excited_happy)
Took you long enough
@KYRA is laugh_giggle AND KATIE is laugh_giggle
}

Try this out:

INT. WALKINCLOSET - DAY
&KYRA spot 0.903 98 158 AND KYRA faces right AND KATIE spot 0.921 231 150 AND KATIE faces left
@KYRA changes into KYRA_default
@KATIE changes into KATIE_default
@cut to zone 2
@zoom on 539 380 to 106% in 0

label dressing_game

KYRA (talk_neutral_loop)
Which outfit do you think I should wear? I have 3 outfits to choose from:

choice
“Jumper and Jeans” {
@KYRA changes into KYRA_date1
@KYRA is dustoff_neutral_loop
KATIE (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Might be a bit too warm, it’s still a heatwave outside.
It’s up to you though.

} “Red Jacket and Jeans” {
@KYRA changes into KYRA_date2
@KYRA is dustoff_neutral_loop
KATIE (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Very stylish girl. But what do you think?

} “Jacket and Skirt” {
@KYRA changes into KYRA_date3
@KYRA is dustoff_neutral_loop
KATIE (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Looking hot girl! But what do you think?
}

@pause for a beat

KYRA (think_rubchin)
(Is this what I want to wear?)

choice
“No” {
goto dressing_game
} “Yes”{
KYRA (talk_pointup_happy)
I’m happy with this outfit
KATIE (talk_excited_happy)
Took you long enough
@KYRA is laugh_giggle AND KATIE is laugh_giggle
}

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Slight problem with this :sweat_smile:

It should say:

INT. WALKINCLOSET - DAY
@KYRA changes into KYRA_default
@KATIE changes into KATIE_default
@cut to zone 2
@zoom on 539 380 to 106% in 0
&KYRA spot 0.903 98 158 AND KYRA faces right AND KATIE spot 0.921 231 150 AND KATIE faces left

Their spot commands need to go after the zone otherwise they show up in zone 1.

The script works, but my characters are no longer on the screen :confused:

AHHHH that’s right. :sweat_smile: Thought the cut was already in zone 1. Thanks!

Refer to @JemU776’s comment above. Sorry about that. :slight_smile:

That’s OK :wink: