Need help with story description and title

Hey guys,

I’m currently working on my new story and I wanted to see if anyone had any ideas of how I can improve the current story description and story title.

Story description: :angel:

You slowly find yourself drawn into the sinful world of humans when you’re tasked with protecting the President’s reckless son.

One rule: don’t get attached.

Story Title: :angel:

His Guardian

Thanks for taking the time to read and suggest some ideas for me!


I read it as drown. :joy::joy:

I like it how it is😊 although what do you mean by sinful world of humans? Is the mc not human or is it just to amplify the tone?

The MC is not a human she’s a guardian angel.

Oh, cool then! You can add that detail if you want to give your readers a slightly clearer idea. The original one is already good, just a tad confusing for me.

Good luck with your story!

I think it sounds good.

And now I want to read it. :sob::sob::sob:

Hello @zaythewriter, this is Sydney the moderator. Welcome to the forum. :smiley: Moved this to Share Feedback since it’s about story ideas and titles. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. :wink:

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