Need help with Story Description


#1

Basic Description"Story is about 2 best friends since birth Laurel and Olivia going through life’s ups and downs. Through adventures and mishaps, they learn who they really are and what really matters in life."

I would like a more enthralling story Decription

Please help me


#2

It’s good. Maybe u can put Laurel and Olivia in front then the rest.


#3

What about this-
Two best friends Lauren and Olivia born together… Living life in a state of ups and downs…
What are the adventures and mishaps by which they learn who they truely are and what really does matter in life???

Just a suggestion though…


#4

I like a lot, it’s perfect thank you


#5

:heart:


#6

I’m glad I could help…:grin::grin:


#7

Get the help you were looking for? :slight_smile:


#8

Yes thank you


#9

Glad this got resolved! Closing :v:t2:


#10