Need help with story description!

It’s quite hard to narrow down the description of a story and I’m struggling. Can someone help me reduce it to 180 characters so it can fit and actually sounds appealing to the readers? **It’s a male MC story.
Here’s the little summary-ish of the story: 2 high school sweethearts, Pierson and Norah, reunite when Pierson shows up at Norah’s house as an in-house nurse because of her dying grandma. Their dying husband (due to cancer) tries to reignite a fire that had been dead for years. Norah has a 3-year-old kid as well. Morgan (her husband) tries to bring them both back together so there’s someone to look after her.
Both of them separated because Pierson couldn’t commit and left to achieve his dreams leaving behind Norah, heartbroken.
I know this is a very messy summary so if you all need some more info about these characters, let me know <3

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Two high school sweethearts come back together, in hope of love!
But when one can’t commit it leaves the other heartbroken.

Use something like this it doesn’t give the story away and gets the readers hooked.

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pierson & norah; high school sweethearts that split because of destiny. who knew that a leap of fate will unite them just one more time, giving them a new chance to love.

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Perfect!

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this sounds great! thank you :relaxed:

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