Need honest feedback on my new story

[daniela.writes]

I published the first few episodes of my new mystery/fantasy story a few days ago and have done some Read4Reads, but I kinda want some honest input so that I can improve it. I have written up to ch. 12, but I’m open to new ideas if anyone would like to give some suggestions and feedback.

Here’s my story info

Title : A Ghost Friended Me
Genre : Mystery/Fantasy
Chapters : 4 published but I’ve written 12 so far
Description : When a ghost turns to you for help, you start to realize that there’s more to your life than you ever imagined - and nothing is as it seems. (LL, CC, Choices Matter, LGBTQ+ representation)
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/r/s/5563514457620480

If you do decide to read it and give your input, you can pm me on here or my instagram @daniela.writes thank you so much!

[daniela.writes]

I released my new story a few days ago and want to see what people’s first impressions may be.

Title : A Ghost Friended Me
Genre : Mystery/Fantasy/Romance
Description : When a ghost turns to you for help, you start to realize that there’s more to your life than you ever imagined - and nothing is as it seems. (LL, CC, Choices Matter, LGBTQ+ representation)

Would you read it? (Please be honest)

• Yes
• No

I’m actually thinking on giving it a new title but I’m not sure

Here’s the link if anyone wants to read it : http://episodeinteractive.com/r/s/5563514457620480

Thank you to those who vote/give feedback

[enijah.stories]

Sounds really good! Definitely would give it a try, what genre is it?

[daniela.writes]

It’s a mystery/fantasy but has some romance

[AngelWings1983]

Who voted no??? At least that person is honest. I definitely will read it, girl!!! I always am in for a new story (my vote was yes by the way.)

[daniela.writes]

Thank you! If you have any feedback I would really appreciate it