Need honest Feedbacks! (Honest reviews)

Hi I am annswrites.
I recently started a new story and that is my first ever story on episode. So, to further more develop it and make my story story better I need some honest reviews.
Also, I can take criticism.

Here is the description:
Title: Just Another Day
Author: Annswrites
Genre: Drama (Romance)
Episodes: 3(more coming!)
CC: Yes
Style: Limelight
Description: A girl rebelling against her parents goes off to New York City to pursue her dreams unaware of the things she is going to encounter.
Thank You!
Help me make my story better.

I would love to help… Would you like to read my story in return!!!

sure :blush:

Let me know if you liked it or not :blush:

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime
Instagram : roy_episode
Style: Ink
Chapters: 6 and ongoing