Need honest Feedbacks! (Honest reviews)

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Hi I am annswrites.
I recently started a new story and that is my first ever story on episode. So, to further more develop it and make my story story better I need some honest reviews.
Also, I can take criticism.

Here is the description:
Title: Just Another Day
Author: Annswrites
Genre: Drama (Romance)
Episodes: 3(more coming!)
CC: Yes
Style: Limelight
Description: A girl rebelling against her parents goes off to New York City to pursue her dreams unaware of the things she is going to encounter.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6707015823982592
Thank You!
Help me make my story better.

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I would love to help… Would you like to read my story in return!!!

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sure :blush:

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Let me know if you liked it or not :blush:

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime
Instagram : roy_episode
Style: Ink
Chapters: 6 and ongoing
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5108744574074880

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