Need honest reviews on how to make this better


It looks so bad

I know Im the worst editor out there hut I need to know how to make it look better…
It looks stupid and bad ik but pls help!!
I rlly need to know how to edit mobile


Um… it isn’t visible…


First of all, don’t be so negative about yourself!
I think the biggest problem is that the lines aren’t straight, it looks really good except for the lines!


Oki imma edit that once my phones charged :smile: