Need honest reviews on how to make this better

[PxlopeEpisode]

It looks so bad

I know Im the worst editor out there hut I need to know how to make it look better…
It looks stupid and bad ik but pls help!!
I rlly need to know how to edit mobile

[S.Dsana]

Um… it isn’t visible…

[PxlopeEpisode]

Oki imma edit that once my phones charged