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#1

So I am aware that that error means there are multiple errors, but I have triple checked my script and came up with nothing. If someone could maybe skim through what I have and see if they see anything that would be great, because my efforts have been fruitless.

SCRIPT:

INT. WARNING - BOTH
readerMessage I tried using sound in this chapter so volume up!
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INT. DOUBLE IDENTITY - NIGHT
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INT. OUTSIDE CLASSROOM - DAY
@TERRI stands screen right AND TERRI faces left AND SEAN stands screen left AND SEAN faces right AND TERRI is idle_awkward

readerMessage Previously…
sound crowd_murmur

    SEAN (talk_think)
I was wondering if you could help me with something.

    TERRI (talk_shrug)
With what?

    SEAN (talk_awkward)
I probably shouldn't be telling you this, but Gale has a huge crush on Whisper.

    SEAN (talk_arms_crossed)
He wants to send her flowers but he doesn't know her last name or address.

    SEAN (talk_think)
That's why I was hoping you could help him out.

    TERRI (talk_mindblown)
I never would have guessed!

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@pause for a beat
@TERRI is idle_awkward
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    TERRI (talk_awkward)
I really want to help you but I can't.

    SEAN (talk_think)
Why's that?

@WHISPER enters from right to upscreen right

    WHISPER (talk_happy_smile)
Because if Gale likes me so much he should tell me in person, it's much more romantic that way.

    WHISPER (talk_handsonhips)
Don't think getting information about me is that easy, Sean.

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EXT. ST ANDREWS HIGH SCHOOL - DAY
@WHISPER stands screen left AND WHISPER faces right AND TERRI stands screen right AND TERRI faces left
sound ext_campus_day_quiet

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Why do they want information about you?

    WHISPER (talk_shrug)
Because I know everything there is to know about them.

@TERRI is startled_surprised
@pause for a beat

    TERRI (talk_mindblown)
But how is that possible?

@pause for a beat

    WHISPER (talk_shrug)
Who knows.

@WHISPER exits left

    TERRI (talk_call_out)
Wait, you can't leave me all alone!

readerMessage Now…

@TERRI exits left AND TERRI is run_athletic
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@transition fade out black 3
EXT. JULES HOUSE - DAY
@cut to zone 3
sound off
@WHISPER enters from right to screen center
@follow WHISPER to screen left in zone 1
@WHISPER faces right AND TERRI enters from right to screen right AND TERRI is run_athletic
@WHISPER is arms_crossed AND TERRI is idle_wounded
@pause for a beat

    TERRI (talk_exhausted)
Where are we going?

    WHISPER (talk_handsonhips)
Well your daddy dearest got a new piece of mail addressed to me.

    TERRI (talk_startled)
Addressed to you?

    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
That's what I said.

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Right...

@pause for a beat
@WHISPER is disappointed
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    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
I'm going to get going now, feel free to follow.

&WHISPER faces left
TERRI (talk_afraid)
But you can’t just leave me, you’re my bodyguard.

@pause for a beat

    WHISPER (talk_shrug)
Then follow me.

@WHISPER exits left AND TERRI exits left AND TERRI is run_athletic
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INT. MAYORS OFFICE - DAY
@PIERCE stands screen right AND PIERCE faces left AND PIERCE is idle_awkward
@WHISPER enters from left to screen left AND TERRI enters from left to upscreen left

    PIERCE (talk_startled)
Here already?

    WHISPER (talk_shrug)
I skipped, as did Terri here.

    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
Now, I believe you have something for me?

    PIERCE (talk_awkward)
Oh, yes. Of course.

    PIERCE (talk_sheepish)
Please be wary, who knows what's in that envelope.

@PIERCE is give_gift
@WHISPER is talk_read_paper AND PIERCE is idle_awkward AND TERRI is think
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INT. WHISPER LETTER - EVIL
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label letter

@pause for 5

    NARRATOR
Do you need more time to read?

choice
“Yes”{

goto letter

}“No”{
}

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INT. MAYORS OFFICE - DAY
@PIERCE stands screen right AND PIERCE faces left AND PIERCE is idle_awkward AND TERRI stands upscreen left AND TERRI faces right AND TERRI is idle_awkward AND WHISPER stands screen left AND WHISPER faces right AND WHISPER is talk_read_paper
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    PIERCE (talk_awkward)
Is it out of line for me to ask what the letter says?

    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
As a matter of fact it is.

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    TERRI (deepbreath)
Does it have anything to do with me?

    WHISPER (talk_shrug)
That's for me to know and you to find out.

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    WHISPER (talk_neutral)
Anyways, thanks for bringing this to my attention Mr. Mayor.

    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
And next time we do a business transaction send the money to me directly, not to my father's account.

@PIERCE is idle_awkward
@pause for 2

    WHISPER (talk_happy_smile)
Great, now that that's cleared up, I'm going to take your dear daughter out for dinner.

    WHISPER (talk_greet)
Hasta la vista.

@WHISPER exits left

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Bye dad, I love you.

&TERRI exits left AND TERRI is run_athletic
PIERCE (talk_call_out)
I love you too!

@transition fade out black 3
EXT. OUTDOOR RESTAURANT OL - NIGHT
sound music_nyjazz_lp
@WHISPER enters from left to screen center AND TERRI enters from left to screen left

    TERRI (talk_exhausted)
You've really got to stop leaving me behind.

&WHISPER faces left
WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
You aren’t in the position to give orders here.

@TERRI is idle_awkward
@follow WHISPER to screen right in zone 3 AND TERRI walks to screen left in zone 3 AND TERRI is walk_sad
@WHISPER spot 1.388 276 -111 AND WHISPER faces left AND TERRI spot 1.388 86 -111

    WHISPER (talk_handsonhips)
Well, here we are your highness.

@TERRI is idle_awkward
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    WHISPER (talk_gossip)
Why are you uncomfortable, you are the one in control here.

@pause for a beat

    WHISPER (talk_shrug)
Please, tell me what else to do.

    WHISPER (talk_think)
Should I give you a massage?

    WHISPER (listen_gossip)
Better yet should I yell that I'm your servant from the top of my lungs?

    WHISPER (curtsey)
Please, your wish is my command.

@pause for a beat

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Are you alright?

@WHISPER is idle
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    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Ever since you read that letter you've been acting oddly.

    TERRI (talk_sad)
What did it say?

    WHISPER (talk_handsonhips)
Don't worry your little head princess, it had nothing to do with you.

@pause for a beat

    TERRI (talk_mindblown)
I don't care about that!

@WHISPER is arms_crossed
@pause for a beat

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
You seem upset.

    TERRI (talk_sad)
Usually you aren't this expressive.

@pause for a beat

    WHISPER (talk_neutral)
You're right, my mistake. I should restrain myself.

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
I didn't mean it like that-

@WAITER stands screen center in zone 2 AND WAITER faces right

&pan to zone 2
WAITER (cough)
Ahem.

    WAITER (talk_awkward)
I am here to relay a message to a |italic| Whisper Willowdane?

@pan to zone 3 AND TERRI faces left

    WHISPER (talk_neutral)
Sadly she isn't here at the moment, but I could pass her the message if you would like.

@TERRI is think
@pause for a beat
@cut to zone 2

    WAITER (talk_think)
I suppose that would be fine.

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    WAITER (talk_read_paper)
He simply said |italic| "I've done my research and I'm back in town"

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    WAITER (talk_think)
Do you need me to repeat it?

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@cut to zone 3

    WHISPER (talk_neutral)
I'm fine, thank you.

@pause for a beat
@cut to zone 2

    WAITER (talk_happy_agree)
Alright.

@WAITER exits left
@pan to zone 3 AND TERRI faces right

    TERRI (talk_think)
What was that about?

    TERRI (talk_startled)
Who do you think it's from?

    TERRI (talk_mindblown)
They know your identity and that you would be here tonight!

@WHISPER is disappointed

    TERRI (talk_repulsed)
Who knows what else they know.

    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
Don't act out of the ordinary, nothing is wrong.

sound phone_vibrate_text

    NARRATOR
*Bzz* *Bzz*

@WHISPER is idle_read_phone_neutral

    WHISPER
(It reads "You can't hide from me now")
("Don't act all out of the ordinary, nothing is wrong")

@WHISPER is deepbreath
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    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Are you alright?

    WHISPER (talk_happy_smile)
I'm totally fine.

    TERRI (talk_think)
Well first you were being expressive, then that weird message from the waiter, and now something with your phone-

    TERRI (talk_neutral_deny)
I think you're hiding something.

    WHISPER (idle)
(Damn, how can she be so perceptive and naive at the same time?)

@pause for a beat

    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
My job is to protect you, not to worry you with my own problems.

@TERRI is idle_sad
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    TERRI (talk_sad)
But I thought we were growing closer.

    TERRI (talk_sad_clutch)
You're the first friend I've ever had.

    WHISPER
(Friend?)

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Was I too annoying?

    TERRI (talk_mindblown)
I'm sorry for whatever it is that I did.

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    TERRI (talk_sad)
I just don't want you to struggle on your own.

    TERRI (talk_happy_agree)
There are plenty of people that care about you here, Whisper.

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Myself included.

@pause for 2
@WHISPER is disappointed
@pause for a beat

    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
I think the gesture's nice and all-

    WHISPER (talk_shrug)
But I don't need your help, nor your comfort.

@TERRI is idle_awkward

    WHISPER (talk_exhausted)
But to put your mind at ease I already know who sent the message.

    TERRI (talk_mindblown)
Who was it?

    WHISPER (deepbreath)
An old friend...

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EXT. NORTH PHILADELPHIA ALLEYWAY - NIGHT
sound off
readerMessage WARNING: Mature Themes such as sexual assault ahead
@FELIX stands screen right in zone 2 AND FELIX faces left
@FELIX changes hair into Generic Short Hair
@FELIX changes into FELIX_young
@KID spot 0.793 84 108 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND KID faces right
@KID changes into KID_dress
@pan to zone 2 AND KID is idle_awkward AND FELIX is admire
@pause for a beat
@FELIX spot 1.280 408 -8 AND FELIX is fall
@pause for a beat
@FELIX spot 1.280 197 -134 AND FELIX is idle

    FELIX (talk_flirt)
What's a young thing like yourself doing out here all by yourself?

    KID (talk_afraid)
I-I just got lost, that's all!

@pause for a beat

&KID is idle_terrified
FELIX (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
I don’t believe that.

    FELIX (talk_angry)
You know that lying is bad right?

    KID (talk_startled)
I-I'm sorry.

@pause for a beat

    FELIX (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
Now how about you tell me the real reason you're out here in a pretty dress.

    KID (talk_awkward)
I-I ran away from home.

    FELIX (talk_think)
Why would you do that?

    KID (talk_sad)
Because my mommy- I mean mother and father don't like me.

    FELIX (talk_flirt)
Well I like you a lot.

@FELIX spot 1.280 160 -139 in zone 2 AND FELIX faces right AND FELIX is kiss_passionate_rear AND KID is idle_terrified
@pause for a beat

    KID (cry_sniff_loop)
P-Please stop!

@pause for a beat
@KID is scream
@pause for a beat
@pan to zone 3

    NARRATOR (KID)
I screamed but no one came to my rescue.

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR (KID)
Ultimately I was on my own.

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR (KID)
I was |italic| 8 years old.

@pause for a beat

NARRATOR (KID)
I should have been worrying about my favorite |color:cyan| color
Or what stuffed animal I would sleep with that night.

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR (KID)
I child should |flash:1| never |reset| have to worry about this.
About a man taking advantage of them.
About a man who "couldn't" stop at just kissing.

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR (KID)
I shouldn't have been forced to be his "plaything" for the night.

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR (KID)
I shouldn't have been forced to endure every |italic| touch
Every |italic| kiss
Every |italic| grope
Every |italic| bruise

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR (KID)
Every |italic| tear.

@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR (KID)
That was the moment that I lost all hope.

@pause for a beat
@transition fade out white 1
EXT. OUTDOOR RESTAURANT OL - NIGHT
@cut to zone 3
sound music_nyjazz_lp
@WHISPER spot 1.388 276 -111 in zone 3 AND WHISPER faces left AND TERRI spot 1.388 86 -111 in zone 3 AND TERRI faces right
@WHISPER is deepbreath AND TERRI is think
@pause for a beat
@WHISPER is deepbreath

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Are you alright?

@WHISPER is deepbreath
@pause for a beat
@WHISPER is dustoff_loop
@pause for a beat

    WHISPER
(I almost lost it there)

@pause for a beat

    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
I'm fine.

@pause for a beat
@WHISPER stands screen right AND WHISPER faces left AND WHISPER is stand_up
@pause for a beat

    WHISPER (talk_arms_crossed)
Our dinner is over as far as I'm concerned.

    WHISPER (talk_shrug)
Follow me or get killed.

@WHISPER exits left AND TERRI is stand_up AND TERRI stands screen left AND TERRI faces right
@TERRI exits left AND TERRI is run_athletic
@transition fade out black 3
INT. LA APARTMENT - NIGHT
@RIN stands screen right AND RIN faces left AND RIN is think

    RIN
(I wonder when Willow will be home...)

@WHISPER enters from left to screen left AND TERRI enters from left to upscreen left AND TERRI is run_athletic
@TERRI is deepbreath AND RIN is startled_surprised
@pause for a beat

    RIN (talk_awkward)
Why is the mayor's daughter here?

@pause for a beat
@WHISPER exits right in 3 AND RIN is startled_surprised AND TERRI is idle_awkward
@pause for a beat

    TERRI (talk_awkward)
Sorry, I will be troubling the both of you for a while.

@transition fade out black 2
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@WHISPER stands screen right in zone 3
@WHISPER changes into GIRL_naked
INT. RUSTIC SHOWER - NIGHT with weather effect HARD RAIN
@WHISPER enters from left to screen center AND WHISPER is walk_sad
@WHISPER is idle_sad
@pause for a beat


#2

Could this line be the issue? The word “weather” should not be there:
INT. RUSTIC SHOWER - NIGHT with weather effect HARD RAIN


#3

Hallelujah, I’m in tears, thank goodness. After I corrected that it was fine. I can’t thank you enough, holy heck. That’s a huge weight lifted from my shoulders.


#4

I’m facing the same issue. Can I send you my script? :frowning:


#5