Need opinion about my "art"


#1

Hi guys!
What do you think about my first art, without backround :joy:

What can I improve?
:smirk::smirk::smirk:


#2

I like it. All i suggest is making a line connecting the opening of her mouth to the end to see the separation in her lips


#3

Thank you!


#4

No problem!! Good work!!


#5

looks pretty nice.
personally, i would change the color of the tears; theyโ€™re almost a bit of neon-ish aqua blue, which is not natural. try making a new layer for the tears and lower the opacity.

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there is some uneven coloring here and there, which i have circled with red; you can fix this by taking a closer look at your drawing and zooming in really close.

shading
the shading on the pants really bothered me. itโ€™s a bit too harsh; you couldโ€™ve blended it a liiiiitle bit more.

other than that, great job!


#6

Okay I will fix it, thank you so much!


#7

glad i helped :blush: canโ€™t wait to see more of your art!


#8

Really cool! But I feel like the wrinkles on the eyebrows make her look pretty oldโ€ฆ


#9

its really good, but the face kinda looks off? like her eyebrows and i cant really see the nose


#10

Thanks for your opinion!


#11

Ooh wanna join episode harmony


#12

I would like to, but when I start school, I will not have that much time :smirk:


#13