Need proofreader and fix grammar + dialog

Need proofreader and fix grammar + dialog

I can!

Can you fix my episode -.- and maybe change the dialog to be more real?

I will send you my script

Sure!

do you have fb or instagram? i will my mail

You can email me queenmilianii@gmail.com

Hello, I’m just send u my script

please check back your mail, mine is dongduongvip@gmail.com