Need reviews and feedback on first story!

[Angel30185]

I need people to read and review my new story. I created my first ever episode and would like some honest feedback. It was created from my cell phone and I am hoping it turned out ok to others viewing it. Now that I know about the online community I am hoping to extend my story from here. Any help would be welcome!

Story: A new start, a new love.
Genre : Romance
Chapters 1-5 published.

Thanks ,
Bethany.

[Clevertimes]

I just opened a review thread! I can add you to the waiting list if you’d like.

Clevertimes' Review Thread

[Adobe_Post_20190124_230720] Hi guys, welcome to my review thread! On this thread I will be giving you my honest opinion on the stories that you have created. I’ll probably read 1-3 chapters of your story. :sparkles:REQUEST FORM: Story title: Author name: Description: Genre: How many chapters you want me to read: :sparkles:WAITING LIST: @Aims1141 @manand61 @Angel30185 @JannahJackson @molly247 @Marshmallow_O @Senada @inkkee @B.Carlton THANK YOU!

[Angel30185]

Yes! Thank you soo much!

[SmileyOcto]

I’ll check it out!! And I’ll pm you my thoughts!