Need reviews and feedback on first story!

I need people to read and review my new story. I created my first ever episode and would like some honest feedback. It was created from my cell phone and I am hoping it turned out ok to others viewing it. Now that I know about the online community I am hoping to extend my story from here. Any help would be welcome!

Story: A new start, a new love.
Genre : Romance
Chapters 1-5 published.

Thanks ,


I just opened a review thread! I can add you to the waiting list if you’d like.

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Yes! Thank you soo much!

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I’ll check it out!! And I’ll pm you my thoughts!