Need some help with character development

Maybe tone her “quirkiness” down to some scenes or scenarios
There’s nothing more annoying than one sided characters. Not saying your character is one sided but look at this from a readers perspective
For example:
An mc who is obsessed with food.

Where everything she does is revolved around food
She mentions food constantly
And she calls you crazy if you don’t worship the chicken tender gods like she does

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