Need some opinions on my story! (No longer needed)

So I may have just written up the first episode for my story. I was wondering if a couple people would read over it and give me their thoughts.

It’s set in a dystopian era. In this world the government controls everything. Their main goal is to make sure people reproduce and don’t question the government. When homosexuality is punishable by death will Elizabeth and her girlfriend get caught?

Still working on that description. . .

I’ll pm you what I have so far if your willing to help.


I will
send me the link

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Alrighty give me a sec

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Can you send me the link? I would love to read it over!!

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