basically Victoria and Riccardo have an affair Riccardo is the head of the Russian mafia and is married but obvs not in love wiith her he meets Victoria at his bar they obvs like each other and sleep together he wakes up the next morning regretful? what should happen next…
The plot is kind of cliche, but it’s whatever you’d like.
Maybe the girl he’s married to catches them?
not really considering ive never read a story where a mafia leader sleeps with the barmaid at his club or has an affair with her and no because then it would be cliché if they were caught straight away they’ve only just slept together im trying to make this story different…they could both be married her to an Italian mafia leader and him to a Russian girl hmmm
If he is the head of Russian mafia, why he is not Russian? Riccardo is more Spanish or Italian name after all. Russian should be more Slavic, like Bogdan or Dima or something like that. Borys is a nice name too. Or Vova is my personal favorite.
his mother is Italian… she named him
It’s just doesn’t fit for me 
Victoria is a quite common name in Slavic countries and Riccardo somehow kills immersion.
well it fits for me I like the names Victoria & Riccardo doesn’t matter where they are from end of the day they fit into my story im just trying to make it so its not like other stories
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