Need title and feedback


#1

Hi I need someone to read my story, give me advice and especially tell me if this kind of topics can be accepted or not … I need advice on the 1st chapter (and others too) because I don’t know if I really have the right to talk about this kind of things thank you so much! :sweat:
And if someone can help me to find a title… :disappointed_relieved:
Dm me please :blush:

Thank you :slight_smile:


#2

I can do it if you want!


#3

Let me know!


#4