Need writing partner for upcoming story

something like this

Same facial expressions?

Yes but I want the girl to have her arms crossed

Sorry its too hard and frustrating for me

Ok that’s fine

Sorry again.

Dont worry bout it

Hey if you have any time right now can you look for this script for me

EXT. BEAUTIFUL MOON ROOF NIGHT
@NATALIE enters from left to screen center
NATALIE (talk_greet)
Hi everyone and welcome to Falling for him
NATALIE (talk_awkward)
So I know I said there’ll be customization
NATALIE (talk_arms_crossed_loop)
But I thought long and hard about it and my characters are the way I visioned them
NATALIE (talk_contend)
But just to be fair I decided you’ll get to choose her hairstyle, lipstick when it’s needs to be changed
NATALIE (talk_exhausted)
So if you have a problem with that please don’t make it an issue and start complaining over fan mail
NATALIE (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
Because I’ll delete right as I see it
NATALIE (talk_greet)
Well that’s all I had to say now sit back and watch the show
sound bloop
@remove NATALIE
@transition fade out black 2.0
EXT. SOUND BACKGROUND PASTEL
@transition fade out black
EXT. WARNING BACKGROUND PASTEL
@transition fade out blue
EXT.COVER1-DAY
readerMessage Cover by @ChayChay
@transition fade out black
EXT. LA CITY STREET - DAY
@transition fade out blue
EXT. DELTA HOUSE - DAY
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 476 261 to 617% in 0
INT. DELTA HOUSE LIVINGROOM - DAY
@zoom reset
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
INT. HALLWAY DOORS CLOSED - NIGHT
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
INT. BEDROOM 3 - NIGHT
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
@pan to zone 2
@FLAME changes into Flame Outfit 5
@FLAME spot 0.539 -51 465 AND FLAME faces right AND FLAME is sleep_uncomfortable
readerMessage 6:50
sound alarmclock_beep
@FLAME is idle_lay_exhausted
@FLAME spot 0.539 113 351
@FLAME is stand_up
FLAME (talk_exhausted)
Ugh it’s too early for this shit
@FLAME walks to screen center AND FLAME is walk_exhausted
NARRATOR
Flame you’re on
@set hsl 0 0 -45 colorize with blendMode Overlay to 100%
FLAME (talk_greet)
Oh hey readers I’m Flame Flores
FLAME (talk_arms_crossed)
I’m 17,I’m in grade 12
FLAME (talk_gesture)
I go to West Coast High School and I live in New York
FLAME (talk_apathetic)
My parents are one of the most dangerous people in the world
FLAME (talk_neutral)
You’ll meet them soon they seem nice and sweet but they are really the leaders of Los Zetos
FLAME (talk_neutral_forward)
Their gang has been established for twenty years now my mom joined when she married my dad
FLAME (talk_contend)
Well that’s enough about me let’s continue with the story
@set hsl 0 0 100 no_colorize with blendMode Multiply to 100%
@FLAME exits right
@transition fade out black
INT.GIRLCLOSET2-NIGHT
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
@FLAME enters from left to screen left
@FLAME walks to spot 0.840 178 233 in zone 3
@pan to zone 3
@FLAME is tinker_loop_rear
FLAME (talk_call_out)
MOM!!!
NARRATOR (MABEL FLORES)
Yes dear?
FLAME (talk_call_out)
Donde esta mi uniforme
readerMessage Translation: where’s my uniform?
readerMessage Flame is half spanish and italian
NARRATOR (MABEL FLORES)
Esta en tu bao
readerMessage It’s in the bathroom
FLAME (talk_call_out)
Bien gracias mam
readerMessage Thanks mom
FLAME (talk_think)
Well I guess I should go shower
@FLAME walks to screen right AND FLAME exits right
INT. BATHROOM - LIGHT PURPLE.
@FLAME enters from left to screen left
@FLAME walks to spot 0.957 174 174
@FLAME is dustoff_loop
@FLAME changes into No towel
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@FLAME changes hair into Messy Back Bun
@FLAME is tinker_loop_rear
sound music_popclub
@FLAME exits right
INT.BATHROOM1-DAY
@FLAME enters from right to screen center
@FLAME is tinker_loop_rear
INT.BATHROOM1-DAY with effect LIGHT RAIN
@FLAME stands screen center
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
sound music_popclub
FLAME (sing_energetic_loop)
Breakfast at Tiffany’s and bottles of bubbles
FLAME (sing_loop_rear)
Girls with tattoos who like getting in trouble
FLAME (sing_doowop_loop)
Lashes and diamonds, ATM machines, Buy myself all of my favorite things (Yeah)
readerMessage seven minutes later
@FLAME is dustoff_loop
sound off
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@FLAME changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@FLAME is dustoff_loop
@FLAME changes into Towel
@FLAME exits right
INT. BATHROOM - LIGHT PURPLE.
@FLAME enters from right to screen right
@FLAME walks to spot 0.957 174 174
@FLAME is dustoff_loop
@FLAME changes into Uniform girls
FLAME (eyeroll)
Ugh I hate this uniform
NARRATOR (MABEL FLORES)
LaLa hurry up and get downstairs or you’ll be late on your first day at west charter
readerMessage Flame’s nickname is LaLa
FLAME (talk_call_out)
Ok mom I’m coming
@FLAME is eyeroll_subtle
NARRATOR (MABEL FLORES)
I felt that eyeroll
@FLAME is mortified
@FLAME exits left AND FLAME is run_athletic_offset
INT.GIRLCLOSET2-NIGHT
@pan to zone 3
@FLAME enters from right to screen center
@FLAME walks to spot 0.966 159 151 in zone 2
@pan to zone 2

label hair_lip

    NARRATOR
What do you want to change?

choice
“Lipstick” {
goto lipstick
} “Hairstyle” {
goto hairstyles
} “I look amazing!” {
goto hair_lip_end
}

label lipstick

    NARRATOR
Lip colors.

choice
“Natural Colors” {
goto lip_natural
} “Bright Colors” {
goto lip_bright
} “Dark Colors” {
goto lip_dark
} “Done” {
goto hair_lip
}

label lip_natural

    NARRATOR
Natural lip colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Blush” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Blush
goto lip_natural
} “Dune” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Dune
goto lip_natural
} “Ivory” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Ivory
goto lip_natural
} “Sand” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Sand
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Mocha” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Mocha
goto lip_natural
} “Taupe” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Taupe
goto lip_natural
} “Terracotta” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Terracotta
goto lip_natural
} “Toffee” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Toffee
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Umber” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Umber
goto lip_natural
} “Rosewood” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Rosewood
goto lip_natural
} “Dark” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Dark
goto lip_natural
} “Sable” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Sable
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Crimson” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Crimson
goto lip_natural
} “Chestnut” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Chestnut
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label lip_bright

    NARRATOR
Bright lipstick colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Bubblegum Pink” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Bubblegum Pink
goto lip_bright
} “Champagne” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Champagne
goto lip_bright
} “Olive” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Olive
goto lip_bright
} “Cherry Red” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
goto lip_bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Orange Crush” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Orange Crush
goto lip_bright
} “Raspberry” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Raspberry
goto lip_bright
} “Rose” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Rose
goto lip_bright
} “Ruby Red” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Ruby Red
goto lip_bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Seafoam” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Seafoam
goto lip_bright
} “Sky Blue” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Sky Blue
goto lip_bright
} “White” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into White
goto lip_bright
} “Lavender” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Lavender
goto lip_bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label lip_dark

    NARRATOR
Dark lipstick colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Azure” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Azure
goto lip_dark
} “Raven” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Raven
goto lip_dark
} “Bordeaux” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto lip_dark
} “Dusty Rose” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Dusty Rose
goto lip_dark
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Plum” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Plum
goto lip_dark
} “Emerald” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Emerald
goto lip_dark
} “Scarlet” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Scarlet
goto lip_dark
} “Wine” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Wine
goto lip_dark
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hairstyles

    NARRATOR
Hair styles.

choice
“Short Hair”{
goto hair_short
}“Mid-length Hair”{
goto hair_medium
}“Long Hair”{
goto hair_long
}“Curled Hair”{
goto hair_curled
}“Tied-Up Hair”{
goto hair_updo
}“Done”{
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_short

    NARRATOR
Short hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Buzzed Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Buzzed Hair
goto hair_short
}“Classy Pixie” {
@FLAME changes hair into Classy Pixie
goto hair_short
}“Messy Pixie” {
@FLAME changes hair into Messy Pixie
goto hair_short
}“Pixie” {
@FLAME changes hair into Pixie
goto hair_short
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Unstyled Faux Hawk” {
@FLAME changes hair into Unstyled Faux Hawk
goto hair_short
} “Slicked Back” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Slicked Back Hair
goto hair_short
}“Twist Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Twist Hair
goto hair_short
}“Long Faux Hawk” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Faux Hawk
goto hair_short
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Cornrow Faux Hawk” {
@FLAME changes hair into Cornrow Faux Hawk
goto hair_short
}“Shaved Sides” {
@FLAME changes hair into Shaved Sides
goto hair_short
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_medium

    NARRATOR
Medium hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Bed head” {
@FLAME changes hair into Shaggy Long Hair
goto hair_medium
}“Classic Bob” {
@FLAME changes hair into Classic Bob
goto hair_medium
}“Dreadlocks” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
goto hair_medium
}“Straight Bob” {
@FLAME changes hair into Straight Bob
goto hair_medium
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Suburban Bubble” {
@FLAME changes hair into Suburban Bubble
goto hair_medium
}“Natural Curls” {
@FLAME changes hair into Natural Curls
goto hair_medium
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_long

    NARRATOR
Long hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Layered Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Layered Hair
goto hair_long
}“Long Feathered” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Feathered
goto hair_long
}“Jules Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Jules Hair
goto hair_long
}“Long Straight Bangs” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Straight Hair
goto hair_long
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Straight” {
@FLAME changes hair into Straight
goto hair_long
}“Styled Corn Rows” {
@FLAME changes hair into Styled Corn Rows
goto hair_long
}“Beach Wave” {
@FLAME changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto hair_long
}“Head Scarf”{
@FLAME changes hair into Side Head Scarf
goto hair_long
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Long Braids” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Braids
goto hair_long
}“Box Braids”{
@FLAME changes hair into Black and Brown Box Braid Updo
goto hair_long
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_curled

    NARRATOR
Curled hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Diva Curls” {
@FLAME changes hair into Diva Curls
goto hair_curled
}“Long Curly Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Curly Hair
goto hair_curled
}“Rebel Half Shaved” {
@FLAME changes hair into Rebel Half Shaved Hairstyle
goto hair_curled
}“Short Curly Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Short Curly Hair
goto hair_curled
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_updo

    NARRATOR
Updo hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Casual Braided Pigtails” {
@FLAME changes hair into Casual Braided Pigtails
goto hair_updo
}“High Ponytail” {
@FLAME changes hair into High Ponytail
goto hair_updo
}“Fishtail Braid” {
@FLAME changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto hair_updo
}“Messy Back Bun” {
@FLAME changes hair into Messy Back Bun
goto hair_updo
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Double Bun” {
@FLAME changes hair into Double Bun Updo
goto hair_updo
}“Braided Crown” {
@FLAME changes hair into Braid Crown Updo
goto hair_updo
} “Punk Ponytail” {
@FLAME changes hair into Urban Punk Ponytail
goto hair_updo
}“Dancer Bun”{
@FLAME changes hair into Dancer Bun
goto hair_updo
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Pulled Back”{
@FLAME changes hair into Monday Morning Updo
goto hair_updo
}“Cornrow Bun”{
@FLAME changes hair into Cornrow Bun
goto hair_updo
}“Ponytail Locks”{
@FLAME changes hair into Ponytail Locks
goto hair_updo
}“Short Tied Up”{
@FLAME changes hair into Short Tiedup Hair
goto hair_updo
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_lip_end

    NARRATOR
Is this the look you're going for?

choice
“Yes! I look perfect!” {
readerMessage Template created by @dara.amarie.ep on IG!
@FLAME is primp_condescend
} “No, let me change something” {
goto hair_lip
}

    NARRATOR (LUCAS FLORES)
Lala hurry tf up
    FLAME (talk_call_out)
Ok ok I'm coming my god

@FLAME exits left
@transition fade out black in 1.0
INT. USHAPE KITCHEN - DAY
@LUCAS FLORES spot 1.370 159 -13 in zone 2
@LUCAS FLORES is eat_cupcake
@LUCAS FLORES faces left
@FLAME enters from left to screen left
@FLAME walks to screen left in zone 2
@pan to zone 2
LUCAS FLORES (talk_greet)
Hey sis
FLAME (talk_greet)
Hey
@zoom on 501 394 to 236% in 0
NARRATOR (FLAME)
This is my older brother Lucas he’s older than me by five minutes
@LUCAS FLORES is talk_arms_crossed
NARRATOR (FLAME)
But he honestly acts like a baby sometimes
@LUCAS FLORES is cry_weep
NARRATOR (FLAME)
I’m the second older me and lucas have a little sister named Mia
@LUCAS FLORES is dance_kpop
NARRATOR (FLAME)
She is the cutest little thing and knows how to cheer us up on our bad days
NARRATOR (FLAME)
You’ll meet her later on
@zoom reset
@FLAME is slap_face
@FLAME is eat_cupcake
LUCAS FLORES (talk_angry_defensive)
What the hell sis that was mine
FLAME (talk_apathetic)
Well now it’s mine now get over it
LUCAS FLORES (talk_arms_crossed)
Let’s just go to school
FLAME (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
I don’t understand why we had to move in the first place
LUCAS FLORES (talk_arms_crossed)
It wasn’t safe where we used to live
FLAME (talk_apathetic)
It’s not safe anywhere for us
FLAME (talk_apathetic)
We’re the heirs of Los Zetos
NARRATOR (MABEL FLORES)
You guys better get your asses out the door now !!!
@FLAME is dismayed AND LUCAS FLORES is dismayed
@FLAME exits left AND FLAME is run_athletic AND LUCAS FLORES exits left AND LUCAS FLORES is run_athletic
@transition fade out black 1.0
EXT. ST ANDREWS HIGH SCHOOL - DAY
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
NARRATOR
West Coast High School
@pan to zone 3
@zoom on 640 256 to 431% in 0
@zoom reset
INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY - DAY
@cut to zone 2
@FLAME enters from left to screen right
@FLAME faces left
@LUCAS FLORES enters from left to screen left
@LUCAS FLORES faces right
FLAME (talk_apathetic)
I already hate this school
LUCAS FLORES (eyeroll)
God do you have to be so stubborn
FLAME (talk_doubtful)
Um yeah I really do
LUCAS FLORES (talk_arms_crossed)
I can’t deal with you let’s just go get our scheldules
FLAME (talk_apathetic)
Whatever et’s go
@FLAME exits right AND LUCAS FLORES exits right
@transition fade out black 1.0
INT. CEO OFFICE - DAY
@cut to zone 1
@PRINICPLE DAVIS stands screen left
@PRINICPLE DAVIS is talk_phone_angry_loop
sound door_knock
PRINICPLE DAVIS
I’ll have to call you back
@PRINICPLE DAVIS is hangup_phone_angry
@PRINICPLE DAVIS faces right
PRINICPLE DAVIS (talk_call_out)
Come in
@FLAME enters from right to screen center
@LUCAS FLORES enters from right to screen right
PRINICPLE DAVIS (talk_gesture)
Ah you must be the Flores twins
FLAME (talk_arms_crossed_loop)
Yep and don’t you forget it
LUCAS FLORES (talk_arms_crossed)
Excuse my sister she isn’t happy about swtiching school

EXT. BEAUTIFUL MOON ROOF NIGHT
@NATALIE enters from left to screen center
NATALIE (talk_greet)
Hi everyone and welcome to Falling for him
NATALIE (talk_awkward)
So I know I said there’ll be customization
NATALIE (talk_think)
But I thought long and hard about it and my characters are the way I visioned them
NATALIE (talk_contend)
But just to be fair I decided you’ll get to choose her hairstyle, lipstick when it’s needs to be changed
NATALIE (talk_exhausted)
So if you have a problem with that please don’t make it an issue and start complaining over fan mail
NATALIE (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
Because I’ll delete right as I see it
NATALIE (talk_greet)
Well that’s all I had to say now sit back and watch the show
sound bloop
@remove NATALIE
sound off
@transition fade out black 2.0
EXT. SOUND BACKGROUND PASTEL
@pan to zone 3
@transition fade out black
EXT. WARNING BACKGROUND PASTEL
@pan to zone 3
@transition fade out blue
EXT.COVER1-DAY
readerMessage Cover by @ChayChay
@transition fade out black
EXT. LA CITY STREET - DAY
@pan to zone 3
@transition fade out blue
EXT. DELTA HOUSE - DAY
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 476 261 to 617% in 0
INT. DELTA HOUSE LIVINGROOM - DAY
@zoom reset
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
INT. HALLWAY DOORS CLOSED - NIGHT
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
INT. BEDROOM 3 - NIGHT
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
@pan to zone 2
@FLAME changes into Flame Outfit 5
@FLAME spot 0.539 -51 465 AND FLAME faces right AND FLAME is sleep_uncomfortable
readerMessage 6:50
sound alarmclock_beep
@FLAME is idle_lay_exhausted
sound off
@FLAME spot 0.539 113 351
@FLAME is stand_up
FLAME (talk_exhausted)
Ugh it’s too early for this shit
@FLAME walks to screen center AND FLAME is walk_exhausted
NARRATOR
Flame you’re on
@set hsl 0 0 -45 colorize with blendMode Overlay to 100%
FLAME (talk_greet)
Oh hey readers I’m Flame Flores
FLAME (talk_arms_crossed)
I’m 17, I’m in grade 12
FLAME (talk_gesture)
I go to West Coast High School and I live in New York
FLAME (talk_contend)
My parents are one of the most dangerous people in the world
FLAME (talk_arms_crossed_loop)
You’ll meet them soon they seem nice and sweet but they are really the leaders of Los Zetos
Their gang has been established for twenty years now, my mom joined when she married my father.
Well that’s enough about me let’s continue with the story

@set hsl 0 0 100 no_colorize with blendMode Multiply to 100%
@FLAME exits right
@transition fade out black
INT.GIRLCLOSET2-NIGHT
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
@FLAME enters from left to screen left
@FLAME walks to spot 0.840 178 233 in zone 3
@pan to zone 3
@FLAME is tinker_loop_rear
FLAME (talk_call_out)
MOM!!!
NARRATOR (MABEL FLORES)
Yes dear?
FLAME (talk_call_out)
Donde esta mi uniforme
readerMessage Translation: where’s my uniform?
readerMessage Flame is half spanish and italian
NARRATOR (MABEL FLORES)
Esta en tu bao
readerMessage It’s in the bathroom
FLAME (talk_call_out)
Bien gracias mam
readerMessage Thanks mom
FLAME (talk_think)
Well I guess I should go shower
@FLAME walks to screen right AND FLAME exits right
INT. BATHROOM - LIGHT PURPLE.
@FLAME enters from left to screen left
@FLAME walks to spot 0.957 174 174
@FLAME is dustoff_loop
@FLAME changes into No towel
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@FLAME changes hair into Messy Back Bun
@FLAME is tinker_loop_rear
sound music_popclub
@FLAME exits right
INT.BATHROOM1-DAY
sound music_popclub
@FLAME enters from right to screen center
@FLAME is tinker_loop_rear
INT.BATHROOM1-DAY with effect LIGHT RAIN
@FLAME stands screen center
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
sound music_popclub
FLAME (sing_energetic_loop)
Breakfast at Tiffany’s and bottles of bubbles
FLAME (sing_loop_rear)
Girls with tattoos who like getting in trouble
FLAME (sing_doowop_loop)
Lashes and diamonds, ATM machines, Buy myself all of my favorite things (Yeah)
readerMessage seven minutes later
@FLAME is dustoff_loop
sound off
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@FLAME changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
@FLAME is dustoff_loop
@FLAME changes into Towel
@FLAME exits right
INT. BATHROOM - LIGHT PURPLE.
@FLAME enters from right to screen right
@FLAME walks to spot 0.957 174 174
@FLAME is dustoff_loop
@FLAME changes into Uniform girls
FLAME (eyeroll)
Ugh I hate this uniform
MABEL FLORES
LaLa hurry up and get downstairs or you’ll be late on your first day at west charter
readerMessage Flame’s nickname is LaLa
FLAME (talk_call_out)
Ok mom I’m coming
@FLAME is eyeroll_subtle
MABEL FLORES
I felt that eyeroll
@FLAME is mortified
@FLAME exits left AND FLAME is run_athletic_offset
INT.GIRLCLOSET2-NIGHT
@pan to zone 3
@FLAME enters from right to screen center
@FLAME walks to spot 0.966 159 151 in zone 2
@pan to zone 2

label hair_lip

    NARRATOR
What do you want to change?

choice
“Lipstick” {
goto lipstick
} “Hairstyle” {
goto hairstyles
} “I look amazing!” {
goto hair_lip_end
}

label lipstick

    NARRATOR
Lip colors.

choice
“Natural Colors” {
goto lip_natural
} “Bright Colors” {
goto lip_bright
} “Dark Colors” {
goto lip_dark
} “Done” {
goto hair_lip
}

label lip_natural

    NARRATOR
Natural lip colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Blush” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Blush
goto lip_natural
} “Dune” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Dune
goto lip_natural
} “Ivory” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Ivory
goto lip_natural
} “Sand” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Sand
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Mocha” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Mocha
goto lip_natural
} “Taupe” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Taupe
goto lip_natural
} “Terracotta” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Terracotta
goto lip_natural
} “Toffee” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Toffee
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Umber” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Umber
goto lip_natural
} “Rosewood” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Rosewood
goto lip_natural
} “Dark” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Dark
goto lip_natural
} “Sable” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Sable
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Crimson” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Crimson
goto lip_natural
} “Chestnut” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Chestnut
goto lip_natural
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label lip_bright

    NARRATOR
Bright lipstick colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Bubblegum Pink” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Bubblegum Pink
goto lip_bright
} “Champagne” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Champagne
goto lip_bright
} “Olive” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Olive
goto lip_bright
} “Cherry Red” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Cherry Red
goto lip_bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Orange Crush” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Orange Crush
goto lip_bright
} “Raspberry” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Raspberry
goto lip_bright
} “Rose” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Rose
goto lip_bright
} “Ruby Red” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Ruby Red
goto lip_bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Seafoam” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Seafoam
goto lip_bright
} “Sky Blue” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Sky Blue
goto lip_bright
} “White” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into White
goto lip_bright
} “Lavender” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Lavender
goto lip_bright
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label lip_dark

    NARRATOR
Dark lipstick colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Azure” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Azure
goto lip_dark
} “Raven” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Raven
goto lip_dark
} “Bordeaux” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto lip_dark
} “Dusty Rose” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Dusty Rose
goto lip_dark
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Plum” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Plum
goto lip_dark
} “Emerald” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Emerald
goto lip_dark
} “Scarlet” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Scarlet
goto lip_dark
} “Wine” {
@FLAME changes mouthColor into Wine
goto lip_dark
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto lipstick
} “Done” {
@add Lipstick to FLAME
@FLAME is apply_lipstick
@remove Lipstick from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hairstyles

    NARRATOR
Hair styles.

choice
“Short Hair”{
goto hair_short
}“Mid-length Hair”{
goto hair_medium
}“Long Hair”{
goto hair_long
}“Curled Hair”{
goto hair_curled
}“Tied-Up Hair”{
goto hair_updo
}“Done”{
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_short

    NARRATOR
Short hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Buzzed Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Buzzed Hair
goto hair_short
}“Classy Pixie” {
@FLAME changes hair into Classy Pixie
goto hair_short
}“Messy Pixie” {
@FLAME changes hair into Messy Pixie
goto hair_short
}“Pixie” {
@FLAME changes hair into Pixie
goto hair_short
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Unstyled Faux Hawk” {
@FLAME changes hair into Unstyled Faux Hawk
goto hair_short
} “Slicked Back” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Slicked Back Hair
goto hair_short
}“Twist Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Twist Hair
goto hair_short
}“Long Faux Hawk” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Faux Hawk
goto hair_short
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Cornrow Faux Hawk” {
@FLAME changes hair into Cornrow Faux Hawk
goto hair_short
}“Shaved Sides” {
@FLAME changes hair into Shaved Sides
goto hair_short
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_medium

    NARRATOR
Medium hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Bed head” {
@FLAME changes hair into Shaggy Long Hair
goto hair_medium
}“Classic Bob” {
@FLAME changes hair into Classic Bob
goto hair_medium
}“Dreadlocks” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
goto hair_medium
}“Straight Bob” {
@FLAME changes hair into Straight Bob
goto hair_medium
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Suburban Bubble” {
@FLAME changes hair into Suburban Bubble
goto hair_medium
}“Natural Curls” {
@FLAME changes hair into Natural Curls
goto hair_medium
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_long

    NARRATOR
Long hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Layered Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Layered Hair
goto hair_long
}“Long Feathered” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Feathered
goto hair_long
}“Jules Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Jules Hair
goto hair_long
}“Long Straight Bangs” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Straight Hair
goto hair_long
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Straight” {
@FLAME changes hair into Straight
goto hair_long
}“Styled Corn Rows” {
@FLAME changes hair into Styled Corn Rows
goto hair_long
}“Beach Wave” {
@FLAME changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto hair_long
}“Head Scarf”{
@FLAME changes hair into Side Head Scarf
goto hair_long
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Long Braids” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Braids
goto hair_long
}“Box Braids”{
@FLAME changes hair into Black and Brown Box Braid Updo
goto hair_long
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_curled

    NARRATOR
Curled hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Diva Curls” {
@FLAME changes hair into Diva Curls
goto hair_curled
}“Long Curly Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Long Curly Hair
goto hair_curled
}“Rebel Half Shaved” {
@FLAME changes hair into Rebel Half Shaved Hairstyle
goto hair_curled
}“Short Curly Hair” {
@FLAME changes hair into Short Curly Hair
goto hair_curled
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_updo

    NARRATOR
Updo hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Casual Braided Pigtails” {
@FLAME changes hair into Casual Braided Pigtails
goto hair_updo
}“High Ponytail” {
@FLAME changes hair into High Ponytail
goto hair_updo
}“Fishtail Braid” {
@FLAME changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto hair_updo
}“Messy Back Bun” {
@FLAME changes hair into Messy Back Bun
goto hair_updo
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Double Bun” {
@FLAME changes hair into Double Bun Updo
goto hair_updo
}“Braided Crown” {
@FLAME changes hair into Braid Crown Updo
goto hair_updo
} “Punk Ponytail” {
@FLAME changes hair into Urban Punk Ponytail
goto hair_updo
}“Dancer Bun”{
@FLAME changes hair into Dancer Bun
goto hair_updo
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}
“Pulled Back”{
@FLAME changes hair into Monday Morning Updo
goto hair_updo
}“Cornrow Bun”{
@FLAME changes hair into Cornrow Bun
goto hair_updo
}“Ponytail Locks”{
@FLAME changes hair into Ponytail Locks
goto hair_updo
}“Short Tied Up”{
@FLAME changes hair into Short Tiedup Hair
goto hair_updo
}“Back to Styles”{
goto hairstyles
}“Done”{
@add Hair Brush to FLAME
@FLAME is primp_brush_hair
@pause for 0.5
@remove Hair Brush from FLAME
@FLAME starts idle
goto hair_lip
}

label hair_lip_end

    NARRATOR
Is this the look you're going for?

choice
“Yes! I look perfect!” {
readerMessage Template created by @dara.amarie.ep on IG!
@FLAME is primp_condescend
} “No, let me change something” {
goto hair_lip
}

    NARRATOR (LUCAS FLORES)
Lala hurry tf up
    FLAME (talk_call_out)
Ok ok I'm coming my god

@FLAME exits left
@transition fade out black in 1.0
INT. USHAPE KITCHEN - DAY
@LUCAS FLORES spot 1.370 159 -13 in zone 2
@LUCAS FLORES is eat_cupcake
@LUCAS FLORES faces left
@FLAME enters from left to screen left
@FLAME walks to screen left in zone 2
@pan to zone 2
LUCAS FLORES (talk_greet)
Hey sis
FLAME (talk_greet)
Hey
@zoom on 501 394 to 236% in 0
NARRATOR (FLAME)
This is my older brother Lucas he’s older than me by five minutes
@LUCAS FLORES is talk_arms_crossed
NARRATOR (FLAME)
But he honestly acts like a baby sometimes
@LUCAS FLORES is cry_weep
NARRATOR (FLAME)
I’m the second oldest and Lucas have a little sister named Mia
@LUCAS FLORES is dance_kpop
NARRATOR (FLAME)
She is the cutest little thing and knows how to cheer us up on our bad days
NARRATOR (FLAME)
You’ll meet her later on
@zoom reset
@FLAME is slap_face
@FLAME is eat_cupcake
LUCAS FLORES (talk_angry_defensive)
What the hell sis that was mine
FLAME (talk_handsonhips)
Well now it’s mine now get over it
LUCAS FLORES (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
Let’s just go to school
FLAME (talk_angry_stubborn)
I don’t understand why we had to move in the first place
LUCAS FLORES (talk_arms_crossed)
It wasn’t safe where we used to live
FLAME (talk_sad_timid)
It’s not safe anywhere for us
FLAME (talk_apathetic)
We’re the heirs of Los Zetos
MABEL FLORES
You guys better get your asses out the door now !!!
@FLAME is dismayed AND LUCAS FLORES is dismayed
@FLAME exits left AND FLAME is run_athletic AND LUCAS FLORES exits left AND LUCAS FLORES is run_athletic
@transition fade out black 1.0
EXT. ST ANDREWS HIGH SCHOOL - DAY
@pan to zone 3
@pan to zone 1
NARRATOR
West Coast High School
@pan to zone 3
@zoom on 640 256 to 431% in 0
@zoom reset
INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY - DAY
@cut to zone 2
@FLAME enters from left to screen right
@FLAME faces left
@LUCAS FLORES enters from left to screen left
@LUCAS FLORES faces right
FLAME (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
I already hate this school
LUCAS FLORES (eyeroll)
God do you have to be so stubborn
FLAME (talk_doubtful)
Um yeah I really do
LUCAS FLORES (talk_arms_crossed)
I can’t deal with you let’s just go get our class
FLAME (talk_apathetic)
Whatever, let’s go
@FLAME exits right AND LUCAS FLORES exits right
@transition fade out black 1.0
INT. CEO OFFICE - DAY
@cut to zone 1
@PRINICPLE DAVIS stands screen left
@PRINICPLE DAVIS is talk_phone_angry_loop
sound door_knock
PRINICPLE DAVIS (talk_phone_angry_loop)
I’ll have to call you back
@PRINICPLE DAVIS is hangup_phone_angry
@PRINICPLE DAVIS faces right
PRINICPLE DAVIS (talk_call_out)
Come in!
@FLAME enters from right to screen center AND LUCAS FLORES enters from right to screen right
PRINICPLE DAVIS (talk_gesture)
Ah you must be the Flores twins
FLAME (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
Yep and don’t you forget it
LUCAS FLORES (talk_neutral_forward)
Excuse my sister she isn’t happy about switching school

is that ok

Ye the one I sent

Ok thanks

No problem

Hey so I was just thinking and since you’re my writing partner for my story I was wondering if you want to make some appearances in the intros of my story?

I don’t mind

It’s up to you

Your choice since it’s ur story

Well my choice is yes so what is your character details and outfit choice

One sec