New Author here, could you please review?


#1

Hi everyone! This is my first story and I would greatly appreciate feedback/ reviews. It’s called Remember Me. Thank you! :slightly_smiling_face:


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Here’s the story description:
When Dean bumps into his ex/first love, she doesn’t remember who he is. Turns out she got her mind erased of him. Will Dean be able to move on and forget her too?

This is a romance story about two people who “try” to forget their past with each other.

story’s link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4695845464571904

or you can search up Remember Me by Mila.episodes


#2

Hi I can check your story out!!


#3

I can only provide brief feedback to the first chapter but I am sure I will keep on reading!


#4

Thank you very much! I appreciate it :blush:


#5

I love the cover and description so I am convinced this will be a fun read!


#6

Thank you! The cover was fun to make :blush:


#7

OMG it looks lovely!


#8

Thank you :sob::sob::sob::heart:


#9

Omg I have read a snippet and can I just tell you I think I have an intuition to know when I see an excellent story!?

Your story so far is beautiful. You have stunned me!


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#11

This story belongs on my recommendation thread. It’s its home - I keep on saying it to some authors but your story is just so damn amazing. You have made a brilliant first impression!

There are stories out there that really stand out of the crowd and your beautiful tale is just plainly exquisite


#12

Oh my Lanta thank you so much for your kind words! This means so much to me! I feel like I’ve gotten validation for my months of hardwork! Thank you so much again! :sob::heart:


#13

You deserve it my love, your months of hard work is SHINING through.


#14

I hope it is okay if you could check my story out as well as you seem to have quite the talent for writing so I would love to see your thoughts on my tale haha


#15

Yes of course I will review it!:heart:️ I graduated with an English degree so I can give you feedback in every department of writing! Again thank you for your kind words literally this is a dream wow :sob:


#16

What’s your story?


#17

It is called Crossed Paths by Dreamer


#18

My goodness - your expertise shows, I have only read a bit of your story but that was even enough to show me how amazing your work is.


#19

Oh my lanta! You are too kind! I will definitely read yours and review it! I can tell you must write well too because you give such eloquent responses and synopisises.


#20

Ah thank you - that is so nice to hear! Haha I am glad my avid reading has rubbed off on me.