New author (please read my story)

Hi everyone!
I have recently published my first story on episode (incomplete) and is currently ten episodes long. I would appreciate it if people could check out a couple of the episodes and give me some feedback.
NO READ FOR READS( if you are interested in a read for read either message me direct or find my previous post about read for reads as there is a list)

Story title: Ferewick boarding school
Writer: becca
Genre : mystery
Number of reads : 72
Description : a fresh start at a new boarding school isn’t quite what it was made out to be when you find an ex pupils dead body on campus. Can you solve this mystery before it is too late?

Hope you enjoy