I’ll for sure check your story and I would love for you to check mine! of course any feedback is always appreciated
Author: Samanntha
Title: Wrestling In Love
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Chapters: 3
Brief Description: My story is about a girl and how the sport of wrestling is her life. Apart from that she is “head over heels with a boy” and that boys best friend is in love her. Big love triangle and as well as drama with a mean girl.
Story title: Among the Stars by Chelsea Alexis Covers and art were amazing. I really enjoyed intro as well. Only error I saw was placing speech bubble with number of chapter in the wrong place at the end of episode. (End od Chapter one… thanks for reading at the end of chapter), so have a look at that.
9.5/10
When it comes to directing everything was smooth and perfect. I love how you use overlays and zooms. I didn’t spot any mistake when it comes to spot directing either.
10/10
I did spot one spelling mistake in e1. It was during MCs dialogue with grandma when grandma said Ive made breakfest, change e with a so you will have the right form: breakfast.
9.5/10
I love the idea of this story! It’s really unique and interesting. Character diversity was great as well, I really enjoyed meeting new characters with different back stories.
10/10
You used a lot of transitions and flashes, I understand that’s important for effect on readers and it was used really well, but I would put another warning in the beginning. It may be disturbing for someone so I would just warn them in advance
Chapters were too long. It’s great that you want to give us a lot of information but in my opinion it was too much.
What I enjoyed the most about your story were choices. Great job!
Overall rating: 9/10
I think this story( after fixing tiny errors) deserves so much more attention! I can see how hard author worked on this. Keep up the great job.
Hey there,
I would love if you could read the first chapters of my story. And give me a review
Author: LeaHol
Name: Living With Wolves
Description: Claire seems to be a normal girl like you and me. However, she is to discover that she wasn’t meant to live this live from the beginning. Read and find out who she really is.
Genre: Fantasy
Hiya!
Title- Hidden Behind Lies…
Author- Chy.dillon
Genre- Romance but will be abit of action
description- What happens when your dad has a past and it finally catches up to you? Nothing is what it seems…
story link_ http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5630728767930368
Title: My Best Friend Next Door
Author: Marina
Episodes: 8 (ongoing)
Style: Ink
Genre: romance
Instagram: episode.mbfnd
Description: What happens when someone from your past moves in next door? Will you fall for them? Follow Maya on her journey through senior year and see her find love where she least expects it!
Author: ally.epistories. Story name: Love, Cinnamonroll and Rock and Roll. Instagram: ally.epistories. Genre: Comedy. Chapters: 3 / more episodes coming soon. Link to the story.