New Creator Here! Honest Feedback? (R4R)

Hi there, would you like to do a R4R?

Title: “I’m Just Me”

Author: SarahtheBeaut

Episodes: 6 (ongoing)

Genre: : Drama

Style: INK

Plot Summary: Alice is your typical “rebel teenager”, but what happens when she goes through self-discovery while facing problems, secrets, and heartbreak?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5116161692532736 1

Instagram:
@sarahthebeaut.epi

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I just published a good story called Daddy, and me.

Description: He is an angel, and she is a little girl with a big mouth, when demons hunt them and troubles arise, will they make it together? Read to find out.

Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4663470435467264
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Hi thank you so much for reading my story!

I read your story and I loved it! The story line is brilliant! Having one Riley P. is just not enough right?:smirk::laughing: Reading your story makes me feel like a high school girl all over again whose dream is finally coming true and it made me cringe in so many ways but also, in a good way. I literally could think of nothing but good things when I’m reading your story!

Do keep writing! I’m definitely gonna look forward to more episodes of this!:kissing_heart:

p.s. this is how my second Riley looks like!:heart_eyes::grin:

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Thank you so much for the feedback! I’m really glad you have enjoyed :heart: We both keep going!

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Hi! I love your script and I love how savage the characters are!:joy:

Everything is fine but just improve your directing commands especially when the character’s walking to a certain position.:grin::+1:t3::ok_hand:t3:

Thank you so much, I’ve been trying to work on that!

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Hi! I like your story line and all the dramas :heart_eyes: and I love how you put in some real life problems into your story which is good and interesting!:+1:t3::grinning: I think a lot of readers can relate to it. I’m excited to read more!:smile: Maybe try to make the episodes longer…:ok_hand:t3: Good job!

Hi! I’ve read your story and the script is good and funny but also, hard to understand sometimes. It’s just a little messy here and there. The commands can still be fixed and improved. If you do that, I think it’s got potential!:+1:t3::smiley: Keep writing!:ok_hand:t3:

Hey!

I’ll do a read or review for you in return for one?

here’s mine…

Story Title : The Art of The Deal
Author : GraceX
Episodes :
18 ongoing
Genre:
Action/Comedy/Romance
Link
:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4622710791208960
Description:
Romance, betrayal and secrets. What will happen when Isobel gets involved in the black market of the art world and a sexy gang leader?
Insta: epy.gracex

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Hi,
Thank you for creating this thread.

My story - I am Dating a Liar
Author - Amiara
Episode - 6out(ongoing)
description - Ava had horrible past so she is afraid to date anyone. She started working in new company where her boss try to get her so she lied to ignore her boss that she is already dating.
link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5425545387311104
instagram - sandy_candy6238
Thank you

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it. :two_hearts:
Yes, the episodes will be longer in later episodes. :slight_smile:

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Hey guys…!! I’d love to do a read for read, if you’re interested please let me know here or in my instagram.If you read mine and send me screenshots,I’ll read yours too…(If you read 2 or 3 or more episodes, I’ll read the same of your story.)
Thank you.

Title: Mistaken Connection
Author: Priyanka
Style: Ink
Genre: Romance
Chapter 8 ongoing.
Comission Art scene from episode 6
Description: We all done so many wrong things in our life…But what happend when a best thing done by you unknowingly after a big mistake? Customize Characters
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6672705810202624
Instagram:@priyanka.episode

Hey, I love to do a R4R with u…:slightly_smiling_face:

Hi! I’ve only read 11 chapters but I’m definitely going to keep reading! I love how you managed to fit different genres into one story which makes it interesting and fun to read especially the cliffhangers at the end of every chapter. It keeps me wanting to read more! Keep it up! :heart_eyes::+1:t3:

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Wow thanks so much :heart::heart::heart: I’m glad your enjoying it! I’ll check yours out now!

Hi! I love the story line but most of the sentences are hard to understand. Maybe you can find someone to help you with English and your script?:ok_hand:t3: Using (. , ! ?) in the right places can also help with the script. And you can still improve the commands! Keep writing!:+1:t3::grin:

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Hey @Daisy26! Your story sounds really interesting, and I’d love to do a read for read! Here’s my story; hope you’ll check it out:

Title: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Romance/Fantasy
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6116658762874880

Thank you so much!

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Hi,

Thank you for your feedback and I will try to improvise.:kissing:

Can someone check out my story
Gemstone I
Thanks :slight_smile:

Hey @Daisy26,
I read your story its great but its short.
Keep it up.:kissing_heart:

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