NEW FANTASY STORY! Need feedback!

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#1

Hi! I’m a new writer and just published my own fantasy story on Episode.

Title: Fallen Witch
Genre: Fantasy
Synopsis: Born by defying the work of nature, will you fight for your fate once more or live in nothing but lies again?

Here’s the link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4621684389314560

I do read for read and also reviews. If you’re interested, do dm me on instagram @k.sebby (If you don’t dm me first, it’s very hard to keep track of you guys :smile: )

FALLEN%20WITCH


#2

Wow I’m intrigued with your cover. It’s nice! :grin:


#3

Aw thanks! I was just reading your story Puppy Love and girl it’s funny! :joy::joy: I really enjoy it.


#4

I can read it now and give you feedback after it, if it’s okay.
Do you want a PM or should I just reply to this?

Btw your cover looks amazing

(3 days later sorry lol but still)


#5

It’s be great if you could screenshot after you read it and send it to my instagram dm. Just to make we communicate easier! :grin: I really appreciate it!


#6

I’m sorry, I can’t read your story, my phone pretty much stopped working and I can’t even open any apps and until I’ll buy a new phone I can’t read anything at all on the app, I’m so sorry your story actually sounds pretty good but I physically can’t open the app or any app (I’m on the forums from my laptop)…
So sorry :confounded:


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