I’m definitely getting bored of:
The “Bad boy”
Mean/Popular girl
Nerd/Makeover
Gangs/Mafia’s
AND SO ON.
Everyone’s making stories based on them certain things. Don’t get me wrong they are or can be interesting but it is getting repetitive.
So I have come up with a few story ideas (most are fantasy) which I believe are not cliche but you can decide which one is your favorite and what I can do to make it better.
THE DEVIL’S DAUGHTER
Myra [means evil] is the daughter of the devil, the third most strongest being, is a bad ass. Satan sends her to the supernatural school on earth to protect her from the threats of hell. There are all kinds of creatures at the school, from witches to werewolves, vampires to hellhounds, it was a new experience. Little did she know she was the most powerful creature, a Hybrid (Half Angel & Devil). Next to the Arch Angel Charmeine (Char). This school is where she learns about herself, her present and future. And it’ll all lead up to the moment where she picks a side Good or Bad. The story will have a point system. If you have points on a side, that will be your choice, but you will get to choose.
Her Hunger
The most beautiful and mysterious girl you’ve ever come across has swept you by your feet and made you fall in love. After one sexual night, you wake up to see she’s disappeared and left two holes at the side of your neck. Your best friend (who’s a mythological geek) helps you to find out who she is, where she came from and if there are anymore of her kind. The thing when you get bitten, you either die or become one. At this time no one knew what a vampire was, never mind if it existed
Purple tears
Raven doesn’t know anything about her powers. Or herself. When she turns 18, she searches for her parents to give her the answers she’s been looking for her whole life. Everyday her powers become stronger and she doesn’t know how to control them. Every year is a new foster family and she can never settle. One day she manages she make contact to her parents, they find her and reunite but suddenly she has been taken to a place. A place her parents believed she would be safe with people like her. Supernaturals
They are not the best, a bit rushed but now u can choose which one is your favorite and what should I improve on to make that story better.
- The Devil’s Daughter
- Her Hunger
- Purple Tears
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Edit
After feedback, i read them through again and realized that they’re fantasy cliche lolll. As a 14 yr old writer, I am definitely trying different techniques. Please continue giving me honest feedback so i can improve and learn from them. No sugarcoating 

