New limelight story

Hey everyone!
As many of you here, I decided to start writting my first episode story. I’ve to admit that I’m very excited. I wanted to know if some of you could read it and give me their feedback and why not give it a shoutout if you enjoyed it.

Description:
Hazel lives an ordinary life in California with her family, until she was caught up by her past after a mysterious encounter and discovers that she was kidnapped.


You will be able to customize your character and change the name =)

Here’s the link :

Thanks in advance to all af the beautiful people who will read this.

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Hello @Venise! This is Sydney the Moderator and we welcome you to the Episode Forum! Take a quick look at our Forum Tutorial for some great tips about where to correctly create topics. I’ve already moved this one from Promote Your Story to Share Feedback since you’re asking for opinions on the story. :wink:

Thanks for reading and have a great day! :sunglasses:

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Woah that sounds so interesting :grinning: