New Release, new writer, R4R

UPDATE: Pls PM me for a r4r!

Hi everyone!! :smile: I’m a new writer in episode and I just published a story. I was wondering if anyone would read it and give me constructive criticism (God knows I need it lol). Any suggestion would be good (directing, writing style, overlays, storyline, branches, etc.) I also do r4r!

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synopsis : What happens when famous celebrity Londyn Delgado dies and nobody notices? In order to continue with the charade you’ll have to impersonate her for two months. CC & choices matter.

Title : Living like a star
Style : LIMELIGHT
Genre : Drama, (7+) Comedy
Published : 3 chapters more coming soon

I swear is not as cheesy as it sounds!

Reviewing:
@Maggy

Reviewed:
Dianadee
Marshmallow_O
Nia
Doreen
Kalani-Santino
Madhu
Rose.xo_97

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that looks really interesting! would you like to do a r4r? :grin:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to…

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Chapters: 5 (More to come)

Full CC/Choices Matter/Point System/Advanced Directing!:blush:

Wow sure! I love mistery stories :star_struck:

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I’m still on the second because I ran out of tickets lol but so far so good! I feel like Ash is involved somehow though I don’t trust him being a goodie good :joy: I guess I’ll have to keep reading to know for sure. So far I’m really liking it. Character development is good and directing in general is also good. Do choices matter?

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thanks so much! i actually like JUST started yours and i’m enjoying it so far! :grin: and yeah they do! if you get to the end of chapter 2 you’ll see that there’s a points system incorporated into the story! also, some choices determine the outcome of other choices isn’t he story! :grin:

Do you want r4r

Title: The Star Necklace

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

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I will do a r4r :slight_smile:

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eyyy let’s do it! I’ll read yours and send screenshot on pm. If not today then tomorrow! (anyone who read this hmu if you want r4r!)

Title: Lacuna
Author: Diana Dee
Instagram: @dianadee.ep (let’s follow each other! and support each other story!)
Genre: Mystery, Fiction, Drama
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3 at the moment

Description:

Darkness has come, and it’s up to Anne to solved it. Little did she know, the root is closer than she thinks. She has to sacrifice a lot, including her love ones. (Choices Matter, CC later on future chapter, Relationship Point, Different Ending)

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5521620417445888

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I would love to do a r4r if you are interested :blush:

Title: The Shadow and the Hunter
Author: Reema
Genre: Drama/ Romance/ Crime!!
Style: ink
Episodes: 7 (ongoing!!!)
Description: The shadow and the Hunter! Enemies finally meet but do they know who the other one is? Who is stronger and what happens if a dangerous love affair develops?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5578702620000256

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Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

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Here is the description of my story :

Title : NEVERLAND
Author : Maggy

Genre : Romance/Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 3 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : Jiselle loves her grandmother’s intriguing fantasy story about a world called ‘Neverland’ that she wishes to discover. Will her wish comes true? Find out!

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4898085022859264

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Would you like to do a r4r?

Story: Adventurous: Time Immune
Genre: Adventure
Summary: When loud-mouth Mikea sets off on a road-trip with YOU, it becomes harder to hide the truth of your origin… oh, and that you are an immortal cyborg.
CC, POC, LGBT, multiple endings
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6566049968685056

Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960

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Hey guys so sry to say this i am currently not up for an rfr (read for read or review for review) But still if anyone wants give my story a read or a review feel free too
My Story:
Author: Madhu
Story Title: Black hearts golden desires
Genre: fanatsy/action /drama/romance
Description: Nand, a sorcerer princess of solataria, has two loving sisters whom she loves to the level of infinity…but what will happen when it’s the vice versa and an old enemy comes back for revenge? Will nand overcome it and save her sisters?
Chapter: 5 published
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5019562149478400
Instagram: @episode.angelindisguise
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If you guys really like my story…pls follow me on insta @episode_angelindisguise for sneak peeks and updates

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Of course! I’ll read yours rn. I’ll send you a pm with the screenshots and my review as soon as I finish it (probably less than an hour, I like binge reading lol)

Hi everyone. I didn’t expect to have as many answers! I’ll read all of your stories for a r4r, they all sound good tbh. I’ll send you a pm with the screenshots and my personal review as soon as I finish reading them (I hope between today or tomorrow). I would be really grateful if you could please also give me your insights or opinion of my story. Happy reading everyone! Wait for my pm

Hey! Yeah let’s do r4r and for any feedback We can Dm each other! ^^
Here’s mine:
NAME: Resident 134
AUTHOR: Nia
GENRE: Comedy
EPISODES: 11
DESCRIPTION: What if 6 friends live in the same building. Comedy, Drama and little romance awaits.
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LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6590421580251136
I would like to know your review! :slight_smile:

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Your story looks interesting…wanna do r4r? :hugs:

Tittle: Taken: Dead or Alive (INK)
Author: xoRoséxo
Genre: Drama/Action
Chapters: 14
Description: Rose & Sophia Beaumont are tough to handle. But what if one is taken and another one has been targeted to kill? Will they able to stay strong? Or love will get in the way?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5725258112892928
Instagram: xoroses.episode

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