New Story Alert : Follow his lead by episode.vel

Hey guys
I’ve published my first story today:
FOLLOW HIS LEAD
Chapter 1 - 4
I would like to know what I can do better
Help me read please
Thankssssss
I’m also looking for a art cover… dm me if you’re an artist and love the story
Ig: @episode.vel

It sounds amazing :slightly_smiling_face:!!
Congratulations :tada:!

Thank youu ANDREEA.1