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Here is the description of my story :
Title : NEVERLAND
Author : Maggy
Genre : Romance/Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : Jiselle loves her grandmother’s intriguing fantasy story about a world called ‘Neverland’ that she wishes to discover. Will her wish comes true? Find out!
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4898085022859264
