New story - feedback needed

[Vanna1]

Hi guys recently I have written a new story called “Believe Me, I’m Lying”
I have written another story before called “Blood Type” and I believe I have improved since then but I would really appreciate some feedback because I want my story to be entertaining and attention-grabbing. I am really thankful to anyone who is willing to help or who has read this post. I will leave my story details below and feel free to drop me a message on my Instagram @stories.by.vanna or leave me a PM or just a message on this post.

Story Deets-

COVER:

AUTHOR - Vanna
INSTAGRAM - @stories.by.vanna
TITLE - Believe Me, I’m Lying
GENRE - Drama & Mystery
NUMBER OF EPISODES - 3
DESCRIPTION:
With Bea’s new position as CEO of the world’s leading software company comes drama and secrets. With a new business deal in the cards, Bea meets Theo, they’ve unknowingly met before, and with them meeting again it could shatter their futures and unearth their pasts.
LINK - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4640417269874688

• Again thank you to anyone who reads it and I look forward to hearing the feedback

Vanna

[Kande10]

Hi! @Vanna1
i reading you’re story right now

[Vanna1]

Omd thank you soo much I really appreciate it since I’ve been unable to get any feedback from anyone

[Kande10]

you’re welcome and it take time to get view and as for feedback

[Vanna1]

yea but thank you so much for being willing to give me feedback

[Kande10]

you’re welcome

[Vanna1]

Hiii do you have any feedback??

[Kande10]

Hi! @Vanna1
i love it but i reading it right now still

[Vanna1]

okkk