New story feedback


#1

hey, i was just wondering if it’s possible for people to read a story (when it’s a work in progress) before it’s published? i would be so grateful if someone can read mine. i can always read your’s in return and follow you! thank you <3


#2

yes you just send them the link


#3

https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/Missing_CC/1 :heart:


#4

not that link. this one. it can only be open with the app


#5

sorry! here you go http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6280062711169024 :slight_smile:


#6

this is mine. i have just finished first chapter if you tell me what you think about it http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6425193401417728


#7

you have done great work. a few grammer mistakes. and time placement but els. its pretty good made. it is mostly the sizes there are wrong with .the charters is often to big or small.


#8

love love love. please let me know when you publish it can you give me feedback on my story?


#9

can you give my story feedback?


#10

sure . can you look at mine too


#11

yes!