New Story Idea! Male MC

[Jubels]

Ok so, after finally finishing all my homework- I finally got onto episode and began brainstorming some stories! I thought of two versions of the same story- lemme know whatcha think, which one you prefer or if I should add or remove anything

Version 1

He’s a nerd, he’s a jock, he’s everything the devils not. When Darren’s little sister disappears. Darren enlists the Summers twins help in order to find her. (Male MC + LGBT options)

Version 2

He’s a nerd, he’s a jock, he’s everything the devils not. When Darren’s little sister dies. Darren is left with his mother to grieve. But will a certain pair of twins be able to help him as well?. (Male MC + LGBT options)

(Still sorta tweaking V2 haha…

[RoseF]

In my opinion, I like version 2 better. It seems more interesting to me.

[natalie81400]

I like the first one better, with a mystery the plot has a better drive to find the missing sister, making it better with episodes progressing further into the goal.

[rickyy]

• version 1
• version 2

[Evilyn]

I prefer version 2 but instead of saying “dies” say “disappeared” it just sounds more interesting with that sense of mystery in it