New Story; Looking For Feedback

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#1

Hello! I’m new to Episode, been writing for about a month or two now on a story called ‘One Born As Two’ … looking for feedback and any tips on how to improve as a writer.

Thank you!


#2

I can review your story! Could I also ask you to review mine?


#3

Of course! Send me a link!


#4

I’ll read it :slightly_smiling_face: and if you want, you can read my story to. Here’s the link:


#5

Thanks! It’s http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5261175276437504.

I’ll send you fanmail with feedback as soon as I can!


#6

Hey, I’ll check it out and let you know what I think, and if you feel like it, you can read mine, I’ll be happy to get some feedback.

Title: Saving Anna.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5043136061112320


#7

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#8