New Story, need reviews and advice

I recently started a new story, I think it needs more choices but I don’t know where or what (it has a different cover on the app, this has only just been added)


Title: Killing Tributes
Author: Laura K
Description: The one thing everyone dreads is getting chosen. I’ve managed to avoid it for 5 years, but I can’t escape any longer. Losing is fatal but winning is worse than death…
Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5960553800269824

Please review and comment, open to r4r

Any help would really be appreciated!

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thank you, I will

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Hello, your cover is really cool, wanna do r4r?

yeah that would be cool, what’s yours called

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the Red Curtain
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read your story!

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read yours too, it was really good and you should definitely continue!!

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I absolutely plan on completing it :slight_smile:

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