New story on the loss

Continuing the discussion from Promoting my story and wanting to read one of your masterpieces!:
Continuing the discussion from Share any of your stories!:

Please check out my new story
It’s new and I’d love some feedback to help me improve.

Title: Powerless love
Genre: Mystery
Description: Ayana is a young women who is living with her mom until she pass on and her dad left them, he was a painter and so is Ayana an important painting get lost. And she falls in love with someone damaged more than her, i can’t really go to details because i will spoil the fun of reading it. My link is


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