New story, published moments ago! Feedback needed! "H&V: The Silver Lining"

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#1

Hi guys!

Just wanted to introduce my NEW story! :smiley:
PUBLISHED ONLY A FEW MOMENTS AGO! :open_mouth:

It’s for Heroes & Villains competition and I really hope you will give it a go and let me know what you think :stuck_out_tongue:

Title: H&V: The Silver Lining
Chapters: 3 (so far, ongoing…)
Genre: Action/Fantasy/Romance
Description: You’re a girl with a cool ability and he’s an arrogant Silverbreath. What happens when you are forced to work together? Will you resist his charms?
CC: Yes, but not for two main characters.

CLICK HERE TO READ:
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4886155157438464

Hope to hear your opinions! <3

P.s. I also have another story called “The Power of Light”, and it’s completed (21 episodes), over 50k reads.

If you enjoy fantasy, please give these a go :stuck_out_tongue: <3

Thank you!!! xxx :kissing_heart:

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#2

Title: H & V: ANNABELLE
Author: Nis
Genre: Comedy
Description: You look like an angel, walk like an angel, talk like an angel. Anna, You’ve got to change your evil ways before I start loving the devil in disguise. Customize & Choice
I’ll give you a fanmail for feedbacks :wink:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6549730624143360


#3

Hey! My name is Dani! :black_heart:

If you want, I can review your story and post the review on my Instagram (daniepisodewriter).

The review will be focus on:

Plot/Originality
Directing
Language/Grammar (I can’t say much about grammar and language because English is not my first language, but if I spot any mistakes I’ll tell you.)
Overall opinion

:warning: The review will be as many episodes as you have read of my story. :warning:
Per example: If you read 3 episodes of my story, I’ll review the first 3 episodes of your story.
Maximum: 4 episodes

Here’s my story:
Title: Darkness
Author: Dani
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Style: Ink
Description: If you can’t get away from darkness, you learn to live with it… A vampire story with action, adventure, mystery and, of course, romance!
This is not a cliche vampire story!
Episodes: 6 (more to come)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5439290271858688
Instagram: daniepisodewriter
I hope you like it :black_heart:
Any other person who wants a review can send me their story too! :blush::black_heart:

Tell me if you want me to do the review! :calling:


#4

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#5