New Story! Read for Read?

Hey! I’m done with your story
I LOVE IT! IT’S AMAZING!
The choices are on point, the plot its amazing and the characters spot it’s just good, everything is on point and I love your story a lot that I wanted to keep reading more. :sob:


I only think you should change “thus” to "this"

Here is proof I’ve done my part and I hope u keep working on this story :two_hearts:

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Thanks! Just finished yours. Really nice, especially the text effects (with -1 on behavior, for example). I like it, keep up the good work! :slight_smile: