New story: The Island. I would love feedback please

Hi everyone!
I’ve had this story idea in my head for quite sometime. I even tried writing on Wattpad because I was having too much trouble with the script.
I’m happy to say that I’m doing my original idea and I’ve been working on episodes for it! I’ve written episode 1 already but I don’t plan on publishing it until I’ve written a couple of more chapters and until I have art work for a cover. Here’s the summary:

Claudia Rose is 20 years old. Living with her 24 year old brother, Max, in their old family vacation home. Claudia’s life isn’t the same after meeting her new next door neighbors, Silas and Raphael.
They say that the Island is haunted with spirits and ghosts. But who really knew what else inhabited the Island.

Here’s a scene of Silas and Claudia from episode 1.

I would love to hear what you think!

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