New story: The Island

Hi everyone!
I’ve had this story idea in my head for quite sometime. I even tried writing on Wattpad because I was having too much trouble with the script.
I’m happy to say that I’m doing my original idea and I’ve been working on episodes for it! I’ve written episode 1 already but I don’t plan on publishing it until I’ve written a couple of more chapters and until I have art work for a cover. Here’s the summary:

Claudia Rose is 20 years old. Living with her 24 year old brother, Max, in their old family vacation home. Claudia’s life isn’t the same after meeting her new next door neighbors, Silas and Raphael.
They say that the Island is haunted with spirits and ghosts. But who really knew what else inhabited the Island.

Here’s a scene of Silas and Claudia from episode 1.

I’d appreciate any feedback of what you think!

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Seems extremely interesting!!! :heart_eyes:

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Hi everyone!
I’ve had this story idea in my head for quite sometime. I even tried writing on Wattpad because I was having too much trouble with the script.
I’m happy to say that I’m doing my original idea and I’ve been working on episodes for it! I’ve written episode 1 already but I don’t plan on publishing it until I’ve written a couple of more chapters and until I have art work for a cover. Here’s the summary:

Claudia Rose is 20 years old. Living with her 24 year old brother, Max, in their old family vacation home. Claudia’s life isn’t the same after meeting her new next door neighbors, Silas and Raphael.
They say that the Island is haunted with spirits and ghosts. But who really knew what else inhabited the Island.

Here’s a scene of Silas and Claudia from episode 1.

I’d appreciate any feedback of what you think!

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It sounds pretty intriguing. I would definitely read it for more details on the haunted island and more for why the neighbors say it’s haunted in the first place.
Lots of questions from the summary hahah
I like the idea. are you putting under horror?
Usually I don’t read stories like this, but I’m liking this one lol

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I’m so glad to hear that!!! I’m not sure what I’ll put it under yet. It will have romance in it also so I’m leaning more towards that category instead. I’ve got some stuff written out for episode 2 already! If I had my cover story art I would probably publish now though because I’m so excited lol

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Oh nice! Let me know when you publish it, I’ll read it for sure!
Also if you’re looking for art, there are a lot of art shops, you just have to look in the art section of the forums. x

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My Instagram is uglygh0stt if you want to follow for when I publish!
Thank you! I’ve commissioned someone already and have asked a couple of others also that way I would have some options when it came to it. :blush:

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Great! and I’ll go follow your Instagram x :grin:

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Hi everyone!
I’ve had this story idea in my head for quite sometime. I even tried writing on Wattpad because I was having too much trouble with the script.
I’m happy to say that I’m doing my original idea and I’ve been working on episodes for it! I’ve written episode 1 already but I don’t plan on publishing it until I’ve written a couple of more chapters and until I have art work for a cover. Here’s the summary:

Claudia Rose is 20 years old. Living with her 24 year old brother, Max, in their old family vacation home. Claudia’s life isn’t the same after meeting her new next door neighbors, Silas and Raphael.
They say that the Island is haunted with spirits and ghosts. But who really knew what else inhabited the Island.

Here’s a scene of Silas and Claudia from episode 1.

I would love to hear what you think!

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Ohhh, “old family houses” means drama and mistery! I feel like if well planned and if you came out with great twists throughout the story , this one could be extremely interesting!! :heart_eyes:

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You’re exactly right!!
I’ve definitely got a lot planned out.
Thanks for your feedback.:kissing_heart:

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Oh boyyy I am already curious and excited and I haven’t yet read the story ahahaha :heart_eyes:

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My Instagram is uglygh0stt if you want to follow it for when I publish!

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Followed! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Thanks so much!! As soon as I get my cover art I’ll publish. :grin:

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Wooow it’s almost then!!! :heart_eyes:

It might be another week or so but yes!

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wooowww I can’t wait!

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