Okay love I have some feedback. I am absolutely in LOVE with your story. The funny thing is I usually don’t like ink lmao.
The directing here was a lil choppy. Like maybe spot them all at the same time instead of spotting them once you panned to the zone.
I was legit DYING at these parts omg.
Ok so finally here; you forgot the apostrophe above the ill. You did that quite a bit in the last scenes and also forgot to capitalize your I’s and where the sentence ended going into the next one.
PLEASE FREAKING CONTINUE!!! You gave me inspiration to write my first ink story btw so…
