New Story: "What If You Were Famous?" I need feedback and also can do R4R!


#1

Hi everyone, I just released my first story “What If You Were Famous?” I need feedback because I want to improve and also I got plenty of passes so if someone wants to do a R4R I would be glad to :smile:

My story: What If You Were Famous?
Author: Camilo Writes.
Genre: Romance
Story style: Ink.
Description: Do you imagine how you life would be if you were famous? Would you have what it takes not to get hurt? CharacterCustomization, LoveInterestCustomization, LGBT&StraightOptions
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon)
Instagram: @camilowrites

Backstory:

Since January 2018, I started writing, making sure to get at least a “decent” directing and writing, (watching videos, practicing with draft stories, etc.) I didn’t want to release anything until I was 100% sure that I liked what I had written. A few weeks ago, that I was done and looked forward to release my first story soon. I finished with little details and finally made it live.

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6155418990936064


I really hope someone can read this and give an honest opinion about it, I look forward to improve and I don’t mind a review that isn’t happy with the story, as well as it helps me, I’m all ears, I was a wattpad writer with no more than 50K and no less 10K reads in each story and loved to receive feedback, I decided to try writing on episode and loved it. Thank you in advance :two_hearts:

If you want an R4R, please fill out this form for it to be easier.


#2

Hello, I need R4Rs and Feedback as well!

Just so I know who is who, and also keep track of everything. You don’t have to fill it out.


#3

hello, i would like to do a r4r with you!
ill sent you proof that i read ur story!
here’s mine

Story title: Fighting Over Him

Story Author: Silent Platinum

Story description: You’re living in a world of fantasy as a demon, but will everything change when you find you’re self and you’re twin sister fighting over him?

link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4837463517167616

Here is what the cover looks like (i will be changing​ it very very soon)


#4

For sure! I have free time so I’ll start reading it right away.

Please fill out this form (https://goo.gl/forms/cOpy8pj0jmMQC8ZR2) So I can know more about you, your story, how to contact you, etc. Thanks!!


#5

Hi, I didn’t get the name of your story but I found your post “Check Out My Story, and Need Feedback. Also, R4Rs!” And found the story on episode, I’ll start reading it right away!


#6

I already filled out your form and I’ll start reading your story when my passes reload :blush:


#7

Thank you!


#8

Thank you! ;D


#9

I will read yours and feedback if wanted!


#10

R4R?

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Being a werewolf is not easy. Especially when you have 3 hot hybrids following your every move.

New episodes every week!

Customizable Characters, 5 Endings, Choices Matter

Chapters: technically 7 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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Want updates on this story? Here’s the update thread!


#11

Would love to do R4R
Tell me your thoughts on my story and I’ll return the favor! :slight_smile:

Living a Dream Revamped - by Mystique
Fantasy / Comedy / Romance :heart_eyes:
Character Customization

Mila transforms into a Magical Being of pure beauty & power! Will she finally live the life she’s always dreamed of and fulfill her destiny, or admit defeat?


#12

Totally, just fill out this form (https://goo.gl/forms/qkCb0XOmdbxwWICF3) to make it easier. (Don’t worry, it’s short and it won’t take more than 5 minutes of your time. :smile:


#13

Alright, done :slight_smile:


#14

Donezo! :smile:


#15

My story: SWEET PERFECTION
Author: Shweta Mehra
Genre: Romance
Story style: Ink
Description: After breaking up, Sierra moves on to a happy single life, but what happens when she falls for “THE NERD” and her ex coming back to her life. CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 4 (more coming soon)
Instagram: @shweta_episode
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5947516399779840

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#16

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#17